All Comments on 'Human Interest'

by cardman314

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used2bjustjused2bjustj12 months ago

I'm not sure what the whole Sarah/Morgan thing was in here for. Seems like a whole other story.

Though not really into the whole ponygirl thing I thought this story was well thought out and written. Lots of little details about the care and training.

J

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I really liked this story and would love to see more of something similar and the fact that it is not overtly smutty but it's just enough. All in all I think this is a great story, but I do have one criticism I would've like to have seen them set up a safeword system for both verbal and non-verbal scenes but that is really the only thing I have to complain about.

Karen_48Karen_485 months ago

Loved this story. You definitely should be doing more writing.

belinda03belinda035 months ago

Thank you for this wonderful story. You have a true gift as a writer

xzg_ltrtcxzg_ltrtc4 months ago

Wonderful story 5/5. The auction/kidnap thing felt totally rushed and the Sarah story was like a different story just plugged in the middle but it was all wonderfully detailed with loving and lovely chars. Now go on and give us the next part of the Best chance auctions ;)

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