by LuciousBi-Writes4U
as I read this I knew it was written by a woman, yet it never lost the lust I like to see. It is very well written I and shall watch for more from the author.
think this story is particularly strong for a first attmept at gay male fiction. And although it is gay male fiction it is not offensively graffic to other readers who are not. over all a good balance was struck here! :)
I love the plot and story line that is presented here, and it is beautifully executed even without dialouge this story never lags:) hot stuff!! :)
great story of a couple college guys first time, although not very graphic, it said enough to let your mind ponder the rest for itself....
even if this isn't your cup of tea... you can't deny that this is a hot way to tell it! Congrats on another great read!
YOU ARE SUCH A HOTTIE!!!!!!!
omg... that's so much fun =)
btw, i love how all my new comments are from you! lol... i'm going to do the same!!! mwuahahaha
*HUGS*