All Comments on 'Humpwell Family Values Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
wow

Hell yes i want to read more.... This story is hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
more i hope

Very enticing....more than just the erotic story...it kept my interest as the plot thickened. More would be great!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good Start

I like the hint of things to come and how they will get there. Keep it up.

Momma_ShellyMomma_Shellyabout 15 years ago
Wicked Hot!

I loved this story! I cannot wait to see where it goes next!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
continue

please continue, sky castle

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
keep this story going

great job. you really built the characters well.

Spice1959Spice1959about 15 years ago
keep going

This definately needs to continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I agree!

"Wicked hot", indeed... Love that fantasy/role-playing angle. Makes it even naughtier somehow. More, please!

billcoombsbillcoombsabout 15 years ago
NICE FUCKING

KEEP IT GOING ..SWEET FUCKING START.THIS IS WHAT MAKES COCKS HARD AND PUSSIES WET..CAN`T WAIT UNTILL THEY ALL ARE IN A GROUP FUCK!!!BILL C.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
HOT !!!

THIS WAS HOT !!! THE STORY HAS ROOM FOR MORE WITH JOSH DOING HIS SISTER ONE DAY, HIS MOM ANOTHER. THE DAD AND DAUGHTER... 3 SOMES ..BRO,SIS,MOM....BRO, DAD AND MOM...DAD,MOM,SIS.....ALL 4 DOING IT IN THE SAME ROOM. COULD EVEN DO A SPIN OFF W/ SIS BRO AND FRIEND (BOTH SEXES) MOM,SON AND FRIEND...DAD,SIS,AND FRIEND !!!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 15 years ago
A very good introduction of the family needs

I'll be hoping to read that the son has the ability to send his mother into the world that you go when you have a life shattering orgasm. She finds having her son fucking her is something she is not willing to give up. She could become addicted to his dick. Thanks for the good start....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I love the descriptions

I loved the descriptions of the daughter's slutty clothing and how they affected her brother and father. I hope you continue this soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
hotttt.... tell us more about this family..!

definetly want to hear more about this sex charged family..but do so for women/moms like myself...and real bi couples like us..where mom and dad not only share their stud jock son together..but with mom insisting that stud hubby and jock son get into hot bi action together..with her and cindi joining in..nothing a bigger turn-on than that type of scenerio..and yet always seems to be ignored on most posts here..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
More!

great start please keep going.

marklionmarklionabout 15 years ago
Great Start!!!! Want More!!

That was a great start to this series. I would like to see more of the series if you're able to write it. I can hardly wait to see how you bring Mother and son together. Also how you bring father and daughter together. Maybe you have the whole family having sex in one bed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
nice tease...

...please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
more, more please

I Think you need to bring Josh and his Sister together then have them plan to seduce their parents...

Then let Josh take on his Mom and Cindy take on her dad.

Great start please keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
For starters

A pleasant read, a good build-up, a promising constellation for lewd incest sex. Now go for it and push the envelope some further on the next part! Don't forget to bring them all together in the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Wonderful Please make a novel of this.

Love it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

i'd love to see the next story in humpwell family values. maybe dad catches the kids doing it and joins in fucking his daughter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
different

i liked it it was different and i love the roleplay can't wait for the mom and son to get it on

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Keep it going

Momma should be exploring ways to get daddy in the shower and then send Cindi in for some reason and have daddy let her have a good look at him. Then she should walk in on Josh and ask if she could join him. After they had all had their own screws they should all get together and have an orgy where they would all swap parteners. They would have Cindi and Mom gobble each other and Daddy and Josh give each other head. Just a few ideas for further chapters. Tom

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
"To be continued if people like it!"

Fuck yeah

playfulpastplayfulpastalmost 8 years ago
Please continue

I would love to read more about this horny family

quwykxzquwykxzabout 7 years ago
More, please!

Thank you for this hot story; I think it would be a downright shame if we didn't get more time with this fascinating family and their incestuous interactions. :)

naughtyjacknaughtyjackalmost 7 years ago
Next Chapter Please

This story definitely needs a second chapter...and then some.

goducks111goducks111almost 5 years ago
where's the second chapter

this was a great read. great tease and sex. ENCORE!!

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