All Comments on 'Hunger and the Fallen'

by alicetrulove

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MaonaighMaonaighalmost 4 years ago
The makings are there

You have the makings of a promising fantasy story here and it's quite well-written. The only problem is that it seemed to finish very abruptly---I'm sure you could squeeze more (a lot more) from these characters so why not give it a try.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
More!!!

More more more!!!!

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