All Comments on 'Hungry for Love'

Way to long.

I'm very surprised about this story! I started reading it randomly, the first one I clicked in, but then I got very invested with it. 11/10 I love it!

Awesome story!

i love this, i'm excited to read more of their story

Oh my goodness, I wasn't sure how someone could keep a story going and keep it hot for so long, but you managed it. I really enjoyed this, and I'd love to see more of Trix and Nova.

Please continue this story, make a part two, three, four, five, as many as you can while keeping the story this interesting, beautiful work

Incredible! Loved the last scene in particular! Can't wait for a sequel (fingers crossed)

Now, this I like- I like this, and I like it very much. Well written- I had a very hard time tearing myself away from this story, you got me hooked- and I didn't even have to get too deep into it before I was snagged on it.

At first I was a little alarmed at the page count- I had no idea what to expect, nor any sense of "how far" I'd keep reading before I made my call on whether or not I was enjoying my read. Turns out "less than one page" would have been a good answer.

It's hard for me to come up with words to explain why I think your work grabbed me so fast, and so completely, but noting some elements that really made this tale a pleasure to experience is certainly within my grasp.

I very much like the way the reader only gets to know as much about the other characters as our narrator seems to know about them. Seeing the world through Nova's perspective is highly entertaining, and I get the feeling that you simply couldn't tell this story and do it true justice without hearing it in her words. Though presumably by nature of her species Nova is cunning, clearly she takes great pride in this skill- and seeing her use it both on matters of seriousness and in matters of lust is absolutely addicting. I am delighted with the way Trix and Nova play off each other. And also, how they can have a serious, sober side when serious and sober is needed. You couldn't make the sex and the romance so powerful without everything else that comes with a relationship. Sure, the sex is a foundation of their relationship- it's a fundamental of who they are. But it's hard to relate to a character who experiences no emotions besides lust, and the most realistic feeling romances I've read acknowledge that there's more to a relationship than the displays of affection.

I can't say no to a story with some of my favorite things: girls in love with girls, a good story, and some very well executed sex! Here I am, 15 pages out of one hell of a read I never saw coming when I clicked on it, and now I'm longing for more.

You've done a fantastic job so far, and I get the impression it can only get even better. Please consider writing a continuation of this story- I feel that quality sapphic content deserves the highest of praise, and you're certainly worthy. Keep writing!

This was sexy, cute, and a fun read, with some solid world building in there and just the right pinch of drama to keep things interesting. Well written, and a good choice on POV. I do hope to see more of these two, but also see Alice get closer as well.

Thank you for sharing with us all here.

For the love of all that's holy. Can we PLEASE get a part 2? This was less pure erotica and more amazing story with lots of erotica. 11/10

Not bad, but it could definitely use some proofreading.

you're styles = your style's

smh

4/5 would be a 5/5 if it didn’t end in a cliffhanger, had a good balance of erotica and real plot which puts it way above most of those sights. Seriously needs a continuation though

Please let us know if she was successful with Astarte..

This flowed so well, didn’t seem long. Going to follow in case you do pt 2

A very well written story/ fantasy.