All Comments on 'Hungry like The Wolf Ch. 07'

This might just be my perception but this felt a bit forced. Like you were just trying to push out an end to be done with the project. There were quite a few bigger errors with grammar and punctuation that made me have to reread a couple parts of this just to even make sense of it. I really liked this series before, starting out with basically a jail break, moving to fish out of water and then trying to resolve the past (though seriously? He was locked away for 50 years and nobody’s surprised he’s alive or asks where he was?). I look forward to future projects from you but hopefully those future stories will get the breathing room they need to really flourish. You’ve got a lot of potential

I thought it would be interesting to read about what happens in Minnesota. And then you said you were thinking about writing stories for the other two pack members. I would say to write what you feel comfortable writing. If you're uncomfortable writing it, we'll probably be uncomfortable reading it because it won't be your best work. If you write the love stories, they will probably take place in Cheyenne. I'm curious about what their first thoughts of Minnesota are. If you have a story to tell, then tell it. Take the time to gain inspiration and then go where the inspiration leads.

I cant wait to see what happens next of the pack?

Challenge yourself with the gay/gay wolf relationship even though it is not my interest . I would also like the development of the new clan in Minnesota.

Should have drugged Cain and stuck him in the cage. Not sure how they haven't missed Finn yet with having to feed him daily, but that's just me.

Great story thanks for the hard work