All Comments on 'Hunted Ch. 03'

This truely is a wonderful story so far and I can't wait to see it continue.

I just found you story today and read all 3 chapters. I can't wait for chapter 4 and the continuation of this story. I am very impressed to find that this is your first Lit submission. I think you must have some sort of background in either literature or english because this does not read like a first time author. I wish you continued success and again I look forward tio the next chapter.

*****

to samantha?

Was really enjoying this story until the third chapter.

What the hell was that?! Would of enjoyed it more if these characters had been mentioned in the first two, however, all of a sudden it a totally different story with people I have NO idea are?! Totally lost me here.