All Comments on 'Hunted Ch. 04'

this story just keeps getting better and better. i hope to read more from you very soon.

Much sooner.

Hi everyone,

my apologies, I had this chapter done and was editing it quite a while ago, but my laptop broke and I lost all my progress on it. I had to start to from scratch, and I suppose it took me longer than it should have to work up the desire to rewrite it.

Sorry everyone, I will try harder to get my next chapter out much sooner. Thank you so much for your interest. =)

This (vampire/non human) has never been the subject of my very rare indulgences of reading fiction. But this one has intrigued me to the point of looking for and wanting more.

Wellsby

Love it! I enjoyed this chapter best of all. I love the struggles within the characters. The dualities of their natures and desires. You do a great job of showing the good and bad side of Darrien as well as the struggle in Sam between wanting him and hating him. I look forward to seeing where this will go with the being that took over Davick (name?)still out there and the chances that the other hunters will try to kill her thinking she's a vampire b/c her abilities are increased. I like that she killed Belle who was a real jealous bitch :) Keep writing.

You really need to get a grip on this story line. You seem to be all over the place with it. It's good writing but your plotting sucks shit.