All Comments on 'Hunter Hunted Ch. 19'

by Daniellekitten

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GlosUKGlosUKover 14 years ago
Ah

I do hope Mirage's gaurdian is about to do something spectacular. Hope ASP aren't to bummed that they finished Braxton off :) PJ xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Loved It

Loved it. Can't wait to see what the white light was about. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Cliffhangers

Excellent. More cliffhangers than a 'Rambo' movie.

One of those stories where one checks daily in hopes of getting a fix.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice..

but let's hope Mira's not really gone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
loving it so far

anychance of you bringing in the norse god thor into it the story, i like the idea of a norse god joining asp, as they were fighting the monster with lightning, just a thought,please please don't kill off mira, that would be too much of a shame, i like her caracter , she's sufferd too much for her to just find love and die just like that, but then it is your story

juliet1503juliet1503over 14 years ago
Ohhhhhhh

Girl, you are SO in troubbbblleeee. lol. :) I do NOT want to be your email right now. Killing off Mirage, or likely not if the "light" has any say in it. Loving it as usual.

ThaliaMarie24ThaliaMarie24about 14 years ago
I actually got teary eyed

Mirage died...I almost cried. So mean of you. :-) I have not commented before, but I adore your stories centered around ASP. They are beyond amazing. :-D

Keep writing! I am addicted!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
what??

It's great that Nick and Arielle are safe... shouldn't they be immune to sunlight, since they've pumped up with the orange stuff??

And how can Mira be dead? She can't stay dead! come on, she needs a happy ending!

MissWizz

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago

Perfect ending for Braxton....now bring mira back to life!

shortydeeshortydeealmost 14 years ago
Great

That was a very good way to end Braxtons life. The two people he made come together finished him off. I hope thet Mira and Hunt get a third chance.

Great Job, Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

KyrlaKyrlaover 13 years ago

I agree, if Mirage doesn't come back, I'll track you down and...and...chain you to a computer until you make it so! :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Omg I cried like a baby when Mira died

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