by Enithermon
Good story, I can't say I understand everything here. One question would be - why doesn't she know or at least accept that he is a shape shifting wizard type. Great characters though, I think I will look for more of your stories.
Is it set just after Morrowwind or closer to Oblivion? Not Skyrim if she met the Nerevar...,but maybe that in itself answers my question?
Enjoyable story so far. I've just been disappointed by another, and this is most certainly improving my mood :)
Breath/breathe seems to be an issue on this site. Breath is the noun; breathe is the verb. Same with cloth/clothe. Just sayin' is all :)
And I still consider you the best author and this the best story on this site. Of course that's all subjective and all.....anyway what matters is that I want more and better I'd be willing to pay for it and count myself DAMN lucky. Even "Fire" which is set in it's own universe with no outside influence (or as little as possible really, hard not to take from life) I consider to be top notch fantasy and I can only hope you decide to get published someday so I can pay you back for the enjoyment I have gotten. If you ever need an editor I'm your man.
Sincerely
Uriziel
This story is absolutely amazing. This is my second time reading through, I figured now is as good a time as any to refresh my memory on how it all began. My goodness, this story is so hot, and every other adjective to describe perfection. Please please please update. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Seriously you fucking raised the bar... Again
uggg!! I need mooore. chpt 2 here I come.
still hoping for another chapter, this is the hottest story on this site!
I can only imagine what you'll do when Skyrim's out.....Then again I can't say I'm not looking forward to finding out
that was HOT! Man I want more! The danger, the humor, the sex! Great story!
I was a little miffed at finding a new story instead of the next chapter of Fire, but I'm totally impressed and now hooked on yet another of your stories. Please hurry and write more!
So different from Fire, but I love it. There is still a lot of mystery surrounding both your protagonists, which is very intriguing. Can't wait to watch their relationship develop! Update soon, please!
You are a good writer, no doubt about it. It is really really good. I like both the stories you have written. A good story captures the heart of the readers and you did it. :)
I love this story so far. It's so detailed, so fantastical yet oddly believable, action-packed & incredibly sexy! I can't wait for your next installment.
I play an elf mage in Shaila. So I am really pleased to read about your little dark elf. She sounds gorgeous...makes me want to go redo my avatar in Second Life, I'm elven there too..lol. Anyway, please continue! I want to see what happens next with these two...and if they helpp each other find safe haven...and all the little cubs in the pride..lots of room for bits of humor. Please write more of both your stories. TC, Lady Falcon
That was simply amazing! Damn that sex scene was hot!!! I'm loving this story line too, the action, the danger, the suspense is all brilliant. I hope this is the start to an excellent series because i am dying to read the next chapter in this story!!
First of all great world building. Second of all.. wait i need to get some air the sex scene was amazing, perhaps even better than Will. Anyways great job I look forward to reading more.