by NotWise
Took me a little while to get past the quirkiness and teenage angst, but it worked it's way into being a really nice piece. And ultimately sexy, too.
Great plot and the dialogue was so funny. I was trying to figure out exactly what type of Twyla was.
I had a lot of fun writing "Hurricane Twyla." My main goal for the story was that people would have fun reading it, so I'm happy to hear that some of you have.
NotWise
I love how distinctive your characters are...and they're natural...
The chaos of it all made it all credible. Surprise after surprise!
What's going to happen next??? :+))
the announcements made clear it's a comedy...not to worry!
Fun story, and the "announcements" throughout didn't seem weird or put off other readers either.
A very unique and interesting literary device. 5*