All Comments on 'Hurricane Twyla'

by NotWise

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Time well spent

Well conceived and written, and at times hilarious.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
A delightful story

Took me a little while to get past the quirkiness and teenage angst, but it worked it's way into being a really nice piece. And ultimately sexy, too.

linnearlinnearalmost 4 years ago
Very Funny

Great plot and the dialogue was so funny. I was trying to figure out exactly what type of Twyla was.

NotWiseNotWisealmost 4 years agoAuthor

I had a lot of fun writing "Hurricane Twyla." My main goal for the story was that people would have fun reading it, so I'm happy to hear that some of you have.

NotWise

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 4 years ago
Pure FUN!!

I love how distinctive your characters are...and they're natural...

The chaos of it all made it all credible. Surprise after surprise!

What's going to happen next??? :+))

the announcements made clear it's a comedy...not to worry!

Cracker270Cracker270about 3 years ago

Fun story. Saw myself as a high school senior

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Fun story, and the "announcements" throughout didn't seem weird or put off other readers either.

A very unique and interesting literary device. 5*

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I'm a soon-to-be-retired planning consultant living in the US southwest. For those wondering about my "Unlikely Angels" story, Thank you for reading, voting and commenting on the story. I'm glad that many of you enjoyed it, but I removed it from Literotica after I made the "b...