All Comments on 'Husband of My Homophobic Sister Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Seems like Nate might be hungry too? Eager to read what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I really hope this picks up….. two chapters of how the narrator and his sister don’t get along and now this short chapter of a random hook up with VERY little detail and still a LOT of grammatical errors

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story is falling apart, it supposes to be about his brother-in-law and is about fucking some random for two chapters? Change the title of something, don't mess our heads with tempting us to have nice incestuous relationship but you give us random fuck-crap I can read in EVERY story on this webpage!

People stop doing generic story, do something unique, ffs!

And this stupid screams "Daddy!!!!" It was just insufferable.

EdeyEdeyover 1 year ago

I like it very much :D Although I would prefer to have more cute Nate :D

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Welcome to my page. I write explicit gay stories, most with some BDSM elements. I enjoy writing about deep, complex characters and having them often grow in ways they wouldn't expect. I love exploring different points of view on the world and letting the story take me where...