by Hubby8182
The story is good but all the spelling mistakes take the enjoyment out of reading the story.
To at least keep the tenses straight? First, it's "I did this", then it's "Jim did this". Doesn't matter, I guess, lousy story anyway.
I don't know anybody who would have this fantasy, a real turn off. Yuck.
I can't believe that you do. Otherwise, there wouldn't be non-sense sentences like these (cut and pasted here with no change):
"Jim tell me how bad you to fuck me."
"Why did you guys what to add this hung cock here."
You idiots that think you know so much and complain day after day about every story and yet come back for more need help.
ITS A FREE SEX SITE WITH JUST AMATEUR WRITERS.
GOD GET A LIFE.
Your story premise has potential, but it's a tough read due to all the mistakes. Find someone to help you out and then improve.
Now we know...Like mother like daughter!! This part was more about incest than any other thing...And again a weak story...1*
Well.....I started reading this part before I backtracked to read the whole three parts. Glad I waited. The writer lost me with Fred's 10" dick. 1*
10 inch cock...like the other comment said, over you writers insisting on 10 inch cocks.
It was great until then. When it fell off that cliff, I decided to save myself.