All Comments on 'Hush'

by Raulmerez1

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SeaReaderSeaReader5 months ago

Yum.

Yes, more, with these two characters, please.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

excellent!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Definitely do a pt 2.

PaperbackreaderPaperbackreader5 months ago

Your descriptive sex scene is really hot. More of the same with some background will keep me intrigued.

donner60donner605 months ago

Great premise……great promise…more please. And thanks for part 1 ..

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Of course I want this story to continue!

dbbriandbbrian5 months ago

Loved the store, definitely need to continue with a part two.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Please do a part 2. Maybe add some twist or surprise to the story. Great job. Time to read your other stories now

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Well done. Please continue.

DaveK7DaveK75 months ago
Five stars!

And yes, a part 2 is greatly desired, here and by the MC!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Nicely done

pcman1950pcman19505 months ago

What a wonderful surprise! My first encounter with your work, and a delightful one. I'd love to see a follow-up. 5+fave+follow.

oldmanbill69oldmanbill695 months ago

Hope sshe calls !

omahakiwiomahakiwi5 months ago

Great premise. Yes please to a continuation

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So I wrote a story. It got published. It was part 1 of a multi part story. 3 times now part two has been sent back. I have used Google editing to clean up my errors I have had a friend read and make suggestions. It still gets rejected. I guess Literotica doesn’t want to sub...