All Comments on 'Hush Darling'

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roveroneroveroneabout 5 years ago
Very hot...!

Always a treat to find women that REALLY enjoy getting buggered, and if it's not me doing it might as well be comic book cutie lesbians.

Tho you might consider getting an editor-there were enough misspellings to really slow up the flow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Peggy Carter is English ...

... so when she's thinking about what she's doing, it's a bum, not a butt, it's an arse not an ass, and it's at least sometimes called shagging, not so often fucking. And when she's mentally describing how beautiful and sexy Angela is, I doubt that she would even mentally use the word 'cunt'. The title Hush Darling is perfect for her, she would definitely say that.

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