by Gweall
Very well written love the story, these guys make an adorable pair. And the girl was a nice touch, you ended it as a family portrait loving. Keep up the good work :)
This is my favorite one so far. Keep it up please.
And one of these days i am so gonna have to try heating up pizza that way.
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Haha, the Pizza conversation was a conversation Kitten2010 and I actually had while writing it, we just kept teasing each other throughout that scene xD
Sweet, enjoyable characters who are funny and smart. The collaboration is perfect.
Great job by both of ya. I enjoyed the humor you added in. The end with Sydney was cute...'it's not your fault our plates are so...stupid' lol. It was a perfect way for them to get a kid. The whole story was very sweet. Hmm...I'd like you to try a bit darker in the next one. You have the threat but the characters tend to escape trouble very easily. Ok, so he was shot but he was fine a few sentences later. I'd love to see you make the threat a bit worse in one of them. Just a request for a future story. But this one was totally enjoyable. Keep writing...together.
Loved it Loved them all but this was brilliant and little Sydney is so cute
I'm with Declan on this one...I don't like to heat ma pizza in the microwave either. Lol
Love it!! Love Declan, Micah, and Sydney what a beautiful family 2 kitties and a doggy. If all humans could learn to overlook their differences like them it would be a better world. Thank you for this lovely story.
I absolutely love your hybrid stories. I find them very interesting, cute and sexy. I've read all your stories and they're great. Keep it up😀
Thank you for a great story. You pulled me in within half of the first page. And by the time it was over I was rooting for the characters. Thanks again