All Comments on 'Hybrid Chronicles: Toby and Mason'

Wow amazing story loved it

I LOVE THIS STORY! Ya'll did an awesome job

OH MY GOD!!! I loved it!!! I totally want to be an Infected now! Lol!

Nawww the ending was cute!

I BOW down to both of you the best ;)

Cute ending. I hope you both have time to do another chapter at some point.

A great story. You really brought these two characters to life and made them very lovable and complex at the same time. I'd love to see you do a story showing us where they end up and have them get together with others maybe and find a way to bring Toby's father down and save the other infecteds. That would be an awesome story and clearly you guys work really well together. It was nice to have this story to add to the other stories about the infected characters.

great job guys...keep writing!

Hey guys, I'm glad you guys all like the stories, I know I had a lot of fun writing it and I'm sure Kitten did too. We both still talk and I'm definitly glad we wrote it. We plan on writing another chapter but not for a few months since she has a wedding to plan, and I'm working two jobs. But we should be doing one :D

I bow down to both of your awesomeness.. we do not deserve to be in your presents.. lol

Great as usual. I didn't expect anything less. I also would love it if you all had time to write more. I love them! <3

I can't say I liked this one as much. It was a good base but I feel like it everything happened too fast. Is every writer on Lit worried about length. I like the relationships to build not just be I love u right out of the gate. And these two characters I think needed a build up. And I know the end was all sweet but again there should be some element of real in the fantasy. I mean the girl breaks in and 10 min later she's got 2 daddy's? Just saying some packages don't have to be so neatly wrapped.

What I like most about this story is the choice of animals. No cats, no dogs, but a very uncommon pairing. Great read!

I am bowing down to your awesomness! I loved it!

You both did a wonderful job on this story. It was sad but romantic and I hope they find somewhere safe