All Comments on 'Hyper College Pt. 02'

Firstly hi I'm the person who got confused with the Points of View changing suddenly. Call me Jamesbond3w (should make an account already some I comment so much but I'm too lazy lol)

You aren't like bad at writing lol just still new to stuff. (Sorry for calling you out on it >3<)

This was a cutesy chapter though kinda quick lol. Was not expecting an orgy in the second chapter haha. If you do more like "school life" chapters I would love to see more of that. Maybe they have a sports day where they have competitions as to show their hyper prowess and such

But that's just me gushing ideas lol

I absolutely love this story and I fan't wait to read the next!! Please, please, please, please, Please! Make another follow up I'd love to read this as an entire series!!