All Comments on 'Hypergeniture Bk. 01 Pt. 04'

Wish I could give this 10 stats lol. Awesome chapter really looking forward to more I hope he gifts the jet to vika

I thought for a while there you were going to go off the rails. But you saved the story. l’ve read your other stories now and this latest series is clearly your best thus far.

Your earlier stories just appeared to miss something, they just didn’t engage the reader to the depth this story does. They are not as good.

If your future tales are to the calibre of this story you will do well scoring and building your fan base.

Scores 5/5

Once again, solid storytelling. You have a gift.

Fucking amazing. My top 2 stories of all time. Really reminds me of threads:island. I believe that what's it called. Marvelous

I loved it! Didn't think tasha could be brought back into the realm of being liked. Like how the sisters are loyal and dedicated only to him. Hope to see alicia break down her hold back. It definitely appears to have some attraction between alicia and oliver

Excellent story ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

@Sl33pingforest: Thanks!

@RedMockers: That’s incredibly flattering! This project really took a lot to write — time and mental energy — so I’m glad it’s coming together.

@Anonymous: Wow! Thanks :D

@Middleson: Happy to hear you’re still enjoying! You’re right… There’s definitely an attraction there, but it needs to develop slowly.

One of my favorite story on this site. Definitely new dynamic in terms of story. Can't wait to read more!

Wow, you're fast with all the uploads, I was expecting the chapters to take long gaps before being posted, can't wait for the next part, thanks for the wonderful story.

When's the next chapter?

@Anonymous: Hoping to get it out soon. I’ve been working VERY hard at it to try get it submitted today, but there have been delays. It will be out this coming week.

Favorite chapter so far. You had great plot advancement and a little sex thrown in to keep the pervs happy. LOL! 5*