All Comments on 'Hypno-Hand'

by Mrhypnosis

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice plot

But it's lube, not loob!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
are you going to write about tomorrow night?

Great story, and well done. I would like to read more of him fucking with her mind and getting her off. Thanks...Rich

winsjamawinsjamaover 15 years ago
Unique Plot

Intersting twist, I look forward to see what happens tomorrow night!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
it's okay

You really need to spell and grammer check before submitting, an editor. The story is there, the excitement you get from telling the story is causing you to mis-spell words and the puntuation is a bit off. It sounds odd, but for an avid reader it throws the story off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

“Ron went through a long series of making her squeeze and hold, until Jena's cunt was hardly even closing from total exhaustion.” - What a unique idea! Love it!

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