All Comments on 'Hypnosis tf Ch. 01-Origins'

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outoftime10outoftime10about 6 years ago
interesting

I hope it gets really filthy and he becomes really power hungry cause this can develop into something really crazy like trying to take over the world or starting a country. Anyhow, good luck, I hope you progress and write the story quickly.

FieroGT1988FieroGT1988about 6 years ago
Great opening

You can do so much with this. Like MC program without the need for computers and such. Please keep working this story.

BecauseYOLOSWAGBecauseYOLOSWAGabout 6 years ago
Part 2?

Just wondering if you are working on a second part, where he makes other people's boobs bigger

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