All Comments on 'Hypnosis Gone Wild'

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zena99zena99about 4 years ago
Don't Stop, please!

Shooting videos is about to get more interesting....and so is this story. 5 stars for a great premise.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
GGH

Victoria and Lily?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Question

Is there going to be another chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Wow, somehow i missed this story when it was first posted. it's funny, i had a VERY similar idea with the exact characters this story is based on at the back in May, crazy how influential these two girls are

terryXterryXalmost 4 years ago
On minor nit-pick

I liked the story. Obviously, you have seen a hypno-video or two. But I always have a problem with getting a mind control device from an ad! There is always an easy work around, about the nerdy friend who you helped out in college and who is grateful. I can think of several others.

XBanXBanalmost 4 years agoAuthor

TerryX

Fair point. I will reveal a more interesting origin of the device in future chapters.

robbroyalrobbroyalover 3 years ago
Victoria and Lily, YES!

Whoever said that is a genius. I'm in love with Lily from GGH, she's amazing.

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