by XBan
Shooting videos is about to get more interesting....and so is this story. 5 stars for a great premise.
Wow, somehow i missed this story when it was first posted. it's funny, i had a VERY similar idea with the exact characters this story is based on at the back in May, crazy how influential these two girls are
I liked the story. Obviously, you have seen a hypno-video or two. But I always have a problem with getting a mind control device from an ad! There is always an easy work around, about the nerdy friend who you helped out in college and who is grateful. I can think of several others.
TerryX
Fair point. I will reveal a more interesting origin of the device in future chapters.
Whoever said that is a genius. I'm in love with Lily from GGH, she's amazing.