All Comments on 'Hypnosissy 11'

Possibly the most erotic stories I've ever read. Encompassing all of my fantasies servicing a mistress and alpha men so well written. I wish it would go on forever

I have really enjoyed Rose and Brians story as well as several other of your stories. I would never tell anyone that can write like you do what to write. You have done what most writers can not, write not only a second but eleven chapters (some different than I thought but all well done). In the time since your last chapter it has made me think and reread a little, with any good story the first paragraph or two needs to grab readers, You did! That said I do not know if you have an ending planned or not, I personally do not believe Brian would give up Football, but if you have thought of a way I think it will be a good story. My hopes for the ending are Rose getting what she said from the beginning Brian being the Man in Football, but a sissy bottom in the bedroom, and I am not saying end up with Rose or Eugene (personally, to much of an ass, good for the story but not believable long term) there are good options already part of the story or a way to end (or start another story line) someone from of the colleges that want him for their team. I said I would not tell you what to write and I did, it just came out, I do hope for an ending true to your story line.

Thanks for the enjoyable read

Ahhhhh! I just finished power reading all 11 chapters of this delicious storyline. I SOOOO want to be Brian(ne)!!! Please continue with this storyline. I'd even commit to Brian's lifestyle for you to do so! I don't care what happens next, as long as the relationship with Rose continues and his initiation happens.

please do another chapter

Loved the story it needs a few more chapters to tell us about the intiation

Need more please

would love to see Brian put on hormones and become a shemale, i know thar is what i would wanr to happen to me

This is sooooo hot. Makes Bambi wish she was Brian

Such a great series! Definitely can’t wait for another chapter! Very hot!

Please continue

hope there are more chapters want to see brian start coming out to his friends as he needs more cock

Love this so far!

As a suggestion, a future chapter could have Rose take Brian on vacation. As he already pondered, she could dress him fully femme somewhere he wouldn't be recognised. Fully feminising him somewhere safe would be hot, and there's always the chance word reaches home.

Please more what happens on Friday Saturday.......

I hope beautiful lady you are planning on continuing Brian’s hopefully extreme journey from where you left off

Maybe Eugene's been orchestrating the whole thing and he's going to force a threesome with himself Brian and Rose

Love the whole story. Tbh I'd commission a conclusion if you'd be up for that. Been watching for new chapters since around 6/7.

I need more of this, dear god, you have a knack for capturing this sissy slut's downfall and glorious free use rebirth.

Its going to be almost a year since the last installment. Can we get some feedback from the author if she is done with the story? If thats the case maybe just a short summation on what all of the characters are doing now and put a bow on this thing and finish it?

If you're done with this story would you give your consent for me to continue it?

Love the humiliation with the nerds and the girl, but transvgirls are always my favorite

I would like to know the last 2 videos Brian needs to watch before Friday,

I honestly would love to see Brian open up to Rose about how much of a slut he has become and how he feels like he's losing control. I'd like to see Rose take her man back under her full control and make him do who/what she wants rather than Brian being used and controlled by so many people

This feels like the most anticipated chapter/s of a story i've read for decades. Simply a fantastic read. Looking forward to more!

This is the best read in along time. Please continue Brian's adventure from Jock to Sissy. He needs to shave his body hair to complement new status. The only think I don't want to see is estrogen. He's about to be drafted to the NFL for goodness sake.

I have loved this story so much sure hope for more like the intimation. it is more with the family.

more please

such a good story, I hope you find the inspiration to continue it

Not really into the whole gay/sissy scene still it was a great story 5 stars need to do chapter 12 when he gets initiated in the gay society club and also finds out who else of his jock team mates are cocksuckers and bottom bois

hope you will add more chapters this is one of the best stories here

Its now over a year. I would love to see this story end or more than one chapter a year. Please?

I would like to see her put on hormones and develop tits and spend time with the family

God I’m such a horny sissy bitch I need the next chapter so bad

It's a great story of personal transformation. I love it and waiting eagerly next parts whatever they would. Thank for amasing and fascinating reading!

when is the next chapter coming??????????

I'm really looking forward to the next chapters, really want to read about his initiation into the gay group finally finding out some of his friends are in it to maybe his dad too, andread about how he gets gangbanged and bukkaked!

His admition about prefering eugines cock over roses pussy could come to a head and they aurgue over who he belongs too. So He has to chose to be eugines jock sissy bitch or stay with rose and follow her guidance and she gives him a choice take hormones and opt for surgery and give up his potential NFL career for his love of her and cocktails and embrace his transfer life.

and maybe he could caught by his mom she finds her pantyhose under his pillow he has to talk with his parents,

Please continue, this story is so hot.

Love to see more abuse by the nerds, maybe the next film night or locker room. He should have to compete with the other jocks to prove he’s the biggest sissy.

Please continue this story! It is so hot I need more!!!

Please continue this story! Is Brian’s father part of the secret society? Was Alyssa once all man and turned to a Shemale by Sarah? What is Roses resentment towards her mother? So many questions, so many possibilities!

Yes! Please continue!

I'm so invested in how Brian develops. Does he finally accept himself as her? What will her sissy name be? Will she elevate to a higher status than Alyssa and give her what she deserves? SO MANY QUESTIONS!!!!

Omg please please continue I love this story of self discovery. So very hot

Would really hope you add more chapters to this hot story

Love how this story is unfolding. More Rose, please....she lights up the narrative. They are so cute together.

And I don't see where the relationship with Rose is going at all. Is he gonna be a cuckold? Because otherwise none of this makes sense.

I loved the series in the closet cd sissy cage is wrong

I would like to see his relationship with Rose develope further. I feel they should stay together, maybe even have Rose become jealous of his fucking around. Make her more in control....

Brian needs to fuck Rose's dad, that would be hot if Brian was above Rose's dad.

After completely transforming him into a sissy on Friday, makeup and wig included thx to the remaining videos, on Friday night she lovingly punishes Brian for hooking up with her mom, Rose cuckolds him with a total asshole homophobic jock with a huge cock. And because he chose her brothers chick over sec with her, she Informs Brian she isn’t removing his cage until his cock can’t get hard anymore, Or she will take his cage off right now and set him free to complete his journey on his own. He has until she is done fucking the jock to decide if he loves her enough to sacrifice his cocks freedom and his ability to ever fuck someone again.

For a fun twist maybe add in something like if he stays, he’ll be expected to be dressed en femme, and to get breasts. He’ll be employed as a guest services specialist for their high end clients. So another life dilemma, college and football, or being allowed to be who he really is, doing what he really loves.

Really need to see more and find out how far Brian will be feminised.

It has been an amazing read so far .

I love these stories. I would love to see a turn where Rose tells him that she is not sure if its working out. Where she tells Brian that although he is bi that he definitely seems to love being a sissy faggot more than he likes fucking pussy. That truthfully Brian barely thinks about pussy anymore. That she didnThat she can never satisfy him the way that Eugenes cock can. That maybe Brian would be better off with Eugene. That she still loves Brian but its becoming more of a platonic love now. That she loves Brian but like a friend or a pet. That maybe instead of being boyfriend and girlfriend they could be besties... Brian of course will reject the idea. He will tell Rose that he is not completely addicted to cock. That maybe he was over-doing it the last week but that he can cutback to just one cock a day. Rose would push back a little. Brian how can you say your not addicted to cock when you have cum leaking out your ass as we speak. Seriously Brian you need to face the fact that your a whore. Saying wouldnt it be nice to suck cock together. To go out all dolled up together and find some boys and bring them back to her dorm. Brian will be torn but still not want to lose his status as Rose's boyfriend. Rose will then have to set some groundrules. That if Brian is going to keep taking raw unprotected cock in his ass that have to stop having sex altogether. She will say that of course you are good about it and "say daddy will you please where a condom before you fuck me" and starts using protection maybe it will work and they can still have sex but she doubts it. That Brian is too big of whore to wear condoms....

Something in that direction I think would be hot.

You definitely are my favorite writer on here!

It seems Rose's original motive was to turn him into a complete sissy. This is most recently confirmed by her slight non commital nod when Brian says he "will ALWAYS be your (Rose's) man" Rose also essentially facilitated Brian's current arrangement with Eugene, albeit by proxy. So i doubt her jealousy would factor in. However there was certainly plenty of foreshadowing regarding Rose's feelings towards her mother. Her father's last comments to Brian being to always do what Rose tells him is curious too. It suggests to me Rose's talents run in the family or at the very least they are aware of hers. As to whom is really influencing whom and their true motivations is anyone's guess. The plot has certainly thickened!

Holy shit this is hot, I also love that contrary to Rose's desires, it looks like he's not going to be completely feminzied. I like that its a jock muscle boy bitch being degraded, when he's not that anymore, the humiliation and enjoyment of his humiliation is gone.

Hoping Brian can stay as a jock so he can be humiliated by those nerds, I think a large part of his appeal is that he is jock, so hoping he will be sissifed but not feminized

Very interesting . Waiting for at least one more chapter. Please!

OMG, I LOVE this series!!! Brian/Brianna's transformation is just so sexy!! I have experienced the power of hypno and so wish I could live it so fully and lavishly as her.

Friday has got to be more transformation by Rose. Release her pet slut and dress him more fully. Only let her cum as a woman. She needs to already know what Brianna did at the party and be a bit cruel/hurt/petulant about Sarah's "liberties" with her (Rose's) property. Still, Brianna gets her amazing orgasm and, out of complete devotion, tells her of Saturday's initiation so she can stay out of the cage.

12, obviously needs to be the orgy.

More, where ever you want to take it.

I don’t think I’ve ever posted a comment after being a member on this site for over 15 years but I had to for this one, please please keep adding new chapters, this is the best thing I’ve ever read on here!

So fucking hot! You are hands down the best writer on here. It's like you're reading my mind when you write. Never stop!

I so badly wanna keep reading this story, so please make more parts of this series!

This story was great loved it!

I need more please give me more!!!!

This entire series is so very captivating and incredibly HOT.....Thank you for the amazing journey...truly well written and sexy AF!

Never enjoyed watching sissy Hypno but this story kept me hard and dripping the entire time. I have a strong urge to find a glory hole and suck my first cock!

This story was so hot I ended up sucking a big cock myself

Please continue this

Amazing story! I've been binge-reading all day and I couldn't stop. I would love to see Brian's sissy side fully developed. It would be soo hot to see her gradually become a smooth, pretty, lean femboy. Maybe Rose's family steadily makes her become more and more of a submissive sissy to serve the whole family.

I'd love to have his Mom strap-on him also. AND have the Rose get him to make sure he was properly dressed in a dress w/Bra and panties and thigh highs, high heels and makeup on his face

when is part 12 coming?????

I cant wait to see who which of the other macho womanizers on the football team, is sucking cock!

Very cruel of you to end this series on that note.

I can not say not if a cock is in front of me and someone tells me to suck.

I want to read more where is #1`2

Great story.Are you going to finish it or leave us hanging.

Ugh! Why did you stop? The progression from here should be the Friday night with Rose and the initiation.

I need the next part in this story

part 12 coming?

Please, tell me you will continue with this story

We need more please master I want to be caged like brian

Well obviously we can't have it left hanging just as it's coming off the rails... 🤟

Essential this is continued .need more

Please continue this series

Please continue this story, I'm dying to know what happens next! You're such a good writer!

2yrs + worth of people pleading for it to be continued and nothing. Safe to say this story is well and truly dead

Omg. Love it! I want to see which of the other jocks teammates have been forcibly turned to sluts. Would love for them to shown and exposed to each other and used by all the nerds of the school getting off on those big men on campus and preppy jocks humiliation.

yes, it would be wonderful for this to continue, i see you produce so much, i love your stories. i hope you get time to finish this one!