All Comments on 'Hypnotic Adventures of Cinderella Ch. 03'

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LadyPartsLadyPartsover 13 years ago
Very good

It took till this chapter before this story started coming together, for me, and I'm very glad I hung in there. Every girl knows about Cinderella, the qualities she embodies and how modern feminism contradicts those ideals. I look forward to the rest of your twisted tale.

LadyP

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
tick tock-the sound of sweet hypnotism

Oh my goodness what a story. I don't read mind control usually but your story caught my eye and I'm so lucky to have read it. AMAZINGNESS please update it regularly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
talent

you have talent amazing vocab and a great imagination who agrees

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
what happened to chapter 2?

???

shrimohitshrimohitover 2 years ago

Very nicely narrating the relationship of sex.

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