All Comments on 'Hypnotic Ch. 01'

Cia!!! OMG you evil thing you! What a place to end the chapter. LOL. Jeez, this is going to be all kinds of hot. ;)

More! This is amazing, probably one of your best - and that's saying something. I just LOVE your writing - please don't make us wait long for the next chapter!

No! No! No! you are just too good at the emotional cliffhanger!! Love this..can't wait

There i am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the moment to happen and you stop?? How Cruel and Mean are you, I want to know what happens next, i hope the wait won't be long, You are good and i will forgive you just as soon as the next chapter is posted, in the mean time i am going to sit in the corner and fan myself lol

I know... I'm sure Ellis and Dav hated me at that moment too! :P Hopefully you all will be less disgruntled with me after I tell you I uploaded Ch. 2 a few days ago so it could post as early as tomorrow... :P Working on a final editing of ch. 3 now and I'll be getting that posted soon. Thanks to all the commenters, I love the praise (who doesn't?) and really appreciate the kind words about my writing.

You'll also get a Carthera short story with 2 of the peripheral characters in this story for the Valentine's Day contest that I'll be posting soon!

I'm so happy to read about Davis. I'm already hooked. You're doing an awesome job and I can't wait to read the rest!

Happy Writing!

Uchena

Ugh. That was getting so good. *grumbles* I know that Dav is going to be my favorite Carthera. Hes so my style. Dripping with sex. Haha. I can't wait for the next chapter. Tre excited.

Well done....

Xoxo night

Really good start. I am looking forward to reading the rest of this story.

I love this series.

Thank you so much for posting this new series. What a wonderful start, and you are pure evil for stopping there.

i can't wait god this is so gooooood

Lovin the cliffy, can't wait for the nxt chapter.

You are oh so evil! Gosh I love your writing!

Other than a few errors that threw off the flow in some spots, this new chapter/storyline was pretty darn good.

rubbish

While i was happy that Davis was finally gonna get some (since you haven't spoke of Snakes mating yet) I kept think in the back of my mind that Elllis had vomit breath. Like "no Ellis! You're too close to his face with your foul breath". I feel like that's just something anyone would be conscious of. Especially with someone you're attracted to.

Rats. Why is there always a knock on the door interrupting them?

Talk about cock-blocking!

Talk about coitus interuptous!

I Want that studs huge cock splitting Ellis open NOW!

♥️😍👅

This story is my absolute favorite of yours and it's my 3rd or 4th time reading this series