All Comments on 'Hypnotism Ch. 01'

I'm sorry but I could not get past the grammatical nightmare that posed as your first paragraph. I would suggest an editor.

great Story so far

Loved it, wished I was Alex.

I'll go ahead and redefine 'grammatical nightmare' as being 'one word misspelt'.

I hope to see more of this story. Erotic hypnotic control is my fantasy

Mind control and denial, 2 of my favs and you hit them perfectly!

It is a good writing full credit to writer. I read it 5 times and every time I become hard.please post the ch2 as soon as possible . I can't wait any more.

I'm about halfway done! You should see it in the next few days.

Very well written

Absolutely Brilliant.

You are instantly immersed into this provocative, innovative story of a teacher who has unknowingly offended a powerful, young, empathic coed with his frivolous interest in her beautiful eyes.

The brief encounter in this first chapter conveys her whimsical, hypnotic revenge with ever more horrendous, emasculating humiliations with no end in sight.

Well worth reading by those who are fascinated with this genre, but after 5 years the author has not chosen to continue. I personally beg bisinger to complete or at least leave a rough outline of where he was taking this exciting tale.