All Comments on 'Hypnotizing Keri'

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liz33ndliz33ndabout 8 years ago

love the idea, but it lost me, not very erotic. sorry, but keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Great work!

I thought this was very erotic. I love every word and enjoyed how aroused it made me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Great start but now Nina should since she is wise to what Keri wants ( a hard cock in her pussy ) - give her what she wants in return for being able to screw her pussy. Nina can also cum between her boobs and spray Keri's chest and face. Keri's butt should become the second or third-time place. Nina can do her thing and Keri can get what she really wants; a hard cock all the time.

Soem details about what each gal looks like, Nina's cock size and Keri's boob size; etc. would make things more in perspective. They can have fun together a lot. Thanks !

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