All Comments on 'Hypnotizing the Babysitter Ch. 01'

I enjoyed reading, you are building this up to a point is as good as the first part of the story.

Okay you got my attention...where are you taking me....

This is a very interesting story, but I'm not sure where it's going. He doesn't seem strong enough, and she is not weak enough even though she tries to be. I don't know if the daughter is going to be the wildcard, or not. I guess part two will answer those questions, if and when you get to it.

I don't think so!

is very powerful writing. A rare five stars from me. Thank you.

Great story so far for 5 stars, thanks!

Someone who both *is afraid* of being hypnotized, and *wants* to be hypnotized?

No, that can't possibly be real :-)

(time for part 2)