All Comments on 'HypnoWho'

Welcome back!! I enjoyed all of your stories before - Sordid Conception, Manhatten Madness, and my favorite, Swingman. I hope you can repost them all, and dare we hope for some NEW efforts? You are one of the all time greats. I never took the time to thank you for sharing your work before, so I am glad I have a chance now. :-)

And for those of you who have never had the pleasure of reading these masterpieces, boy are YOU in for a treat!!

Your story was incredibly hot, and I liked the little variances and surprises. Some were predictable, and I knew Dr. Heimler had something up his sleeve. However your ending was too sudden and way too much of a reversal of excitement. By making the doctor feel sordid and dirty, you also made your reader feel the same. Dr. Heimler came off as a total sleazeball and your story let him win, which of course is the opposite of what people desire. My excitement level from reading your story changed from a 10 to a 1 in a few short paragraphs. You created an awesome premise and could have had unlimited adventures with these characters, instead you ruined it.

Couldn't stop reading 'til i was finished. Like i said above: good stuff

i feel that you needed to go even further with the story of what happened to the wife and dauthers and the rest of his ladies and to keep it just as hot as before

Very good story about mind control. The only criticism might be the female characters need a bit more fleshing out.

Dr. Heimler(?) seemed to be more of an after thought to end the story than an integral part of the story.

Thought it was great, very hot. I would love to see this story continue ,after dad gets out of jail! I googled and tracked down Sordid Conception,Swingman, and Manhatten Madness, good stuff.

That was definately an incredibly hot story! I loved it.. you could maybe even bring in a little dicipline (spanking!) for the daughters, and strap ons for some fun, but other than that... excellent work!!! SMILE ( I certainly did.. and moan, and scream..!)

Very well done story. It's great how it came back to the beggining and the twist with Heimler was really good. And the sex was amazingly well done as well. Keep up the excellent work.

i loved it up until the other doctor part it sorta ruined it for me because he had screwed a man that truely loved his daughter and most likely the bastard killed his own daughter it just made me so angry

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

One of the best stories I've ever read! The sex was perfectly written, the language was balanced. Not sure I was eager for the bitter end, but it made an alright counterpoint

Really? Really? I was hoping that someone so informed could have told the simple truth: hypnosis doesn't work this way! I'm a certified hypnotist; it doesn't!I know there are alot of stories out there about hypnosis, and I thought yours would be different. The characters seemed very learned about hypnosis, which I can only suppose means that you did some homework. What I would suggest is that if the clients are willing subjects that you use the hypnosis to intensify the sensation, but your current line is just ludicrous! Good day, sir.

good descriptions, fair writing but I personally don't like this type of story. The revenge, meanness, and ending are unsatisfactory to me ,myself and I. sex should have an element of love in it to be enjoyed by all.

very very hot. kind of twisted ending, but still VERY HOT!!

The only complaint that I have is that it's too long !!

Great story, the ending was a little flaky, but still good, just too long

It was very good. I didn't really like the ending but it did provide a nice twist. Maybe you should write a sequel where for instance Dr. Heimler takes full use off his new subjects. Maybe you could have alec be able to get revenge on him somehow.

wild stuff - who cares if hypnotism doesn't work that way

Loved the twistedness of it all. Very few grammatical errors and generally well-written. One of the best of the genre. A belated thanks for a wonderful piece of work.

was extremely frustrating this is one of the best long hypno stories I've ever read,and I've been reading most of what's on Simon's site for 6 years-pistolpackinpete

not very realistic. it is impossible to hypnotize someone to do something completely against their will. they need to at some level want to do it.

I loved how the story developed and everything that occurred but the way you ended it seem like you didn't know how it should and just placed a generic "The end". Overall great story. Continue to write more stories like this and hopefully you can give them a good ending.

Thanks for the sex-filled mind bending fantasy.

Who fuckin cares how realistic it was or wasn't?

It was filled with great sex scenes that were well

written and highly charged, I thoroughly enjoyed

the ride and look forward to catching up on your

other stories. Thanks for the entertainment and

ummm satisfaction that I was able to discharge.

If you know what I mean.

griped my imagination big time.. great sex scenes and a decent story line.

man, what a ride. Loved it.

I love hot mind control stories. Wish this had been a mother/son story but daddy/daughter was hot too. Kind of fucked up how it ended, though.

Your story was AWESOME... but the ending was COMPLETELY bullshit!!!! If anything, you should have written a way for Alec to figure out how to get out from under his control!!!! It would have made for a much better story!!!!

I can't believe I wasted my time reading this all the way to the end!!! At least now I know how you write... that way I'll NEVER read another story of yours!!!

loved it till the last two pages. Ending killed all story

You scewed the pooch. Phuked the Dog. However one wants to say it. The other comments I read here say the same thing pretty much. The story was really erotic. Sure, a bit of mind control and non consent entered into it too, but not outright violent rape. With all of his subjects, they were gently convinced that they were exactly where they wanted to be and doing exactly what they wanted to do. At the end, in an ugly scene, you made your main character see ugly things and hear ugly things. You ended it by his future jailtime for doing something that he did not do. Cause Myra's death. Oh, he'll go to jail for rape. He'll give up his liscense, lose his family, his practice, his life. For an old pervert wanting revenge after losing something he kept for himself. A rape he didn't commit, he was only there to supply the cum and her trigger word. I don't want to read anything else of yours. You need to be kinder to your characters. Readers become attached to and identify with characters they like.

I see quite a few people hated the ending, but it was perfectly set up right from the 1st page! The facts of Heimler 'dropping in' whenever he wanted, Alec's constant arousal (when he thought how before he was happy just twice a week with his wife), how he saw it was affecting his work but he couldn't control anything, it all leads to the end. I just hate seeing the bad guy win!

Killed any intention of reading any more of your work

Short on plot, but lots of great sex.

Great story but; ending could have continued longer it just stopped need to find out what happened the doctor’s family we are left guessing

you totally fucked up the ending

i hope you get raped by a giant dick

I really enjoyed this story right up to the end when you twisted it into some weird NTR revenge. I get you hinted at Heimler being up to something, but it this ending totally ruined everything. Very sad.

Bummer. I have read this exact story scenario somewhere else. Coincidence?