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"Fuck you, Heimler! I hope you rot in hell!" Thornton groaned as he felt the first stirring of his own orgasm.
"If there is a Hell, that's where we'll both be," Heimler taunted him as he rubbed his cum into Nicole's face with his dickhead. "But it's time for you to give Nicole your cum. I could order you to cum, of course. But I'll let things take their natural course. Enjoy yourself. I think it may be the last pussy you get until you are a very old man."
God, I'll go to prison for this! Thornton realized. I can't cum!
"Nicole, Alec needs some help cumming. Talk to him, work that pussy on him, I want him to shoot in your cunt as much as you want it!" Heimler laughed maniacally.
"Yessss, Alec, please cum! Oh God, cum way up in my pussy! Fuck me, fuck me and fill me with your cream! " Nicole pleaded around Heimler's fading hard-on.
"Nicole, don't! Please, don't!" Thornton pleaded he thrust again and again into her accommodating sex. He felt Nicole's long soft legs wrap around his ass as she drew him down onto her body.
The ending was unavoidable. It was a simple matter of friction.
Thornton's pleasure center reached the point of no return despite his intense desire not to come. Thornton's cock twitched and spat his seed into Nicole's eager hole and Heimler's laugh resonated throughout the office.
His revenge was complete.
THE END
Chile Peeler - 1995
- COMMENTS
Anonymous10 months agoI really enjoyed this story right up to the end when you twisted it into some weird NTR revenge. I get you hinted at Heimler being up to something, but it this ending totally ruined everything. Very sad.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoyou totally fucked up the ending
i hope you get raped by a giant dick
Anonymousabout 5 years agoGreat story but; ending could have continued longer it just stopped need to find out what happened the doctor’s family we are left guessing
Anonymousover 7 years agoI see quite a few people hated the ending, but it was perfectly set up right from the 1st page! The facts of Heimler 'dropping in' whenever he wanted, Alec's constant arousal (when he thought how before he was happy just twice a week with his wife), how he saw it was affecting his work but he couldn't control anything, it all leads to the end. I just hate seeing the bad guy win!
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoYou scewed the pooch. Phuked the Dog. However one wants to say it. The other comments I read here say the same thing pretty much. The story was really erotic. Sure, a bit of mind control and non consent entered into it too, but not outright violent rape. With all of his subjects, they were gently convinced that they were exactly where they wanted to be and doing exactly what they wanted to do. At the end, in an ugly scene, you made your main character see ugly things and hear ugly things. You ended it by his future jailtime for doing something that he did not do. Cause Myra's death. Oh, he'll go to jail for rape. He'll give up his liscense, lose his family, his practice, his life. For an old pervert wanting revenge after losing something he kept for himself. A rape he didn't commit, he was only there to supply the cum and her trigger word. I don't want to read anything else of yours. You need to be kinder to your characters. Readers become attached to and identify with characters they like.
Anonymousover 8 years agoYour story was AWESOME... but the ending was COMPLETELY bullshit!!!! If anything, you should have written a way for Alec to figure out how to get out from under his control!!!! It would have made for a much better story!!!!
I can't believe I wasted my time reading this all the way to the end!!! At least now I know how you write... that way I'll NEVER read another story of yours!!!
