All Comments on 'I Am My Bully's Slave Pt. 01'

by ck119

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You should add more chapters to show how it actually gets to her being bred by him

jleetechiejleetechieover 1 year ago

Very good start. Hopefully future chapters will be a bit longer.

princesssexciprincesssexciover 1 year ago

Cant wait for more!! It’s a great start.

flow_sweetlyflow_sweetlyover 1 year ago

Actually liked the length but eager for more

astuffedshirt_pervastuffedshirt_pervover 1 year ago

Interesting start. Wondering where it goes from here. I think between "and kneeled in front of him" and "I licked my lips and leaned forward" you should have put in a few more words about her moment. No thoughts in her head? No nerves? Thundering heart?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Waiting for Part Two. Good start!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I found another user who just wrote a VERY similar story, https://www.literotica.com/s/josephine-the-bully I hope they didn't copy your work

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Tired of these one story cliffhangers, write a good series or end it all at once

ck119ck119about 1 year agoAuthor

Part 2 coming soon

piecesbbcloverpiecesbbclover11 months ago

Love to read more???

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Bullying girls what a pussy.

HarreadingHarreading5 months ago

Good plot but a four inch girth is not very thick

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