by ck119
You should add more chapters to show how it actually gets to her being bred by him
Interesting start. Wondering where it goes from here. I think between "and kneeled in front of him" and "I licked my lips and leaned forward" you should have put in a few more words about her moment. No thoughts in her head? No nerves? Thundering heart?
I found another user who just wrote a VERY similar story, https://www.literotica.com/s/josephine-the-bully I hope they didn't copy your work
Tired of these one story cliffhangers, write a good series or end it all at once