by Bluepen451
A story about a selfish, promiscuous whore. The difference between her and her husband is simple, she cheated, she participated in orgies. He was dating and talking to another woman. This bitch deserves a life of loneliness, contempt, no kids to hate her, no disgusted ex-friends, no ex-husband, moral husband 1*
Why is it that every man in theses illy tales who happens to regularly attend church is deemed as weak and sexless? In most cases that couldn't be further from the truth.
selfish cheating slut who insults her husband to make it his fault. Hopefully soon she'll learn what goes around comes around. Terrible person on all fronts!
Meh. If your goal was, as stated, to provoke an emit reaction, I don’t think you succeeded. Third person narrative might have worked better, but I found the narrator pretty superficial and boring.
What leaves you for the rest of your life. Real loneliness part of what you missed. Your children miss trusting you. Wondering when sex is no longer a real option in old age because no one is interested in you as a person Just be surviving in your own little world
Unfortunately, mother and wife are FULL TIME positions.
NOBODY, including her husband, stays married because of the sex. Suck it up like the rest of us...
You're a slut. Your Ex married a widow from OUR church. What kind of church do you go to? Does your church condone your behavior?
Well lets see, a few bouts with STD's, getting the crap beat out of you because you bite down to hard on one of their cocks. I know, the guys finding you look a little long in the tooth, or your not being able to squeeze their cocks as tight anymore. The worst of all, the dog died and now you truly are all alone. Other than that, maybe boring old Simon wasn't that bad. I know, you go down and buy that old game 'Simon Says' just so you can keep a little Simon in your life. I guess all of that would fall under 'Something a little different'.
The construction and writing in this story are well done. The subject not so much.
I dislike stories like this that make the one person out to be the bad guy in order to justify the other person turning into a slut (man or woman). Everything is OK as long as it makes you feel good, right? If she was unhappy with her marriage she should have divorced him and moved on.
She needs to find a good man that can satisfy her in bed but can be monogamous. Get back to a stable life before the STDs hit.
While she got the sex she wanted, she is alone. No one to share her life with. Sad.
What's next for a female this self centered? Lose your looks as you drift into the age where younger men ignore you and men your age are in more demand than you are. A few younger guys will take advantage of your plummeting self worth and strip you of large portions of your inheritance. After that get some cats, get blotto every night on wine, and die lonely.
Not sure why you think people would hate it, although I suppose there's always that "She's a cheating cunt" crowd.
Marriages fail all the time, and often for these very reasons. One partner simply isn't having their needs met. More often, both of them are unhappy.
Well told tale, IMO.
Well..MC isn't exactly a likeable person, is she? The speed and ease with which she trashed and left her marriage didn't ring any alarms in her head either.
No one else is really likeable either. . The 3 lovers just blatantly disrespect and dismiss the other husband. How about trying a conversation instead of flashing your vague? "But no.. he probs won't wanna..oh well. Sorry 'bout your marriage. Let's fuck some more."
That was pretty shitty all around.
First, you get a fucking divorce, then, after it's final, then you can fuck around all you want. Fuck around before the divorce is final, then yes, you are a slut and deserve all the pain and suffering possible. Simple, really!
An exciting rendition of a loving wife with needs and a husband who couldn't care less.
What was the point of all this? Loving wife where? Another woman who goes full slut mode college style after 20 years of marriage? Nothing real different here other than a whore retelling a tail of her sexcapades, no storyline, drama, or anything.
She was right about one thing, she's not a slut, she's actually a whore.
You were successful in your quest to evoke emotion. I hated the story, skimmed most of it, and gave it the one star it deserved b/c the logic in it seemed ridiculously contrived to make it okay that this person in a marriage had a good reason to cheat. And sorry, wasn't even written well enough to hold my interest enough to do more than skim.
At least one of them is better off now. Don't bother writing more telling us which one; we know.
In an ideal world, she could have both, but then again, Simon was a little man/boy
I figured the haters would roast your ass on this one……I have 3 words for you…..”good for you”. Your giving one life to live, that saying; only you can make you happy. No one else can do that. I too, was in a bad relationship years ago. (By the way I’m a male). I got my first wife pregnant when we was dating. We were young, she was very pretty, we married for what I thought was the right thing to do. Sex was great till our daughter was born. Then she decided sex was for making babies only. I endured this situation for 10 more years & one more child. I divorced her, I was a prick in my family’s mind & hers too. Our kids had to live with her with me only getting visitation every other weekend & few weeks in the summer. It cost me dearly. I tried never to bring their mom up in any bad way. My kids were not the guilty ones. Finally years later I found a nice gal who also had a couple kids. We dated for several years. She finally moved in with me & we lived together for 5 more years. We’ve been married now for 15 years. The sex is off the chart, I couldn’t be happier. My own kids now want nothing to do with my ex wife. They have come to realize just how miserable of a person she is. I’ve forgave her years ago. I’ve also tried to get my two daughters to at least visit her from time to time. Trust me there is someone special out there who would love to have a sexy wife like yourself who cleans, cooks, and fucks like a rabbit in heat. Thanks for the read….good luck!!!!
I'm reading all the comments and wondering if not only the commenters read the story but comprehended it?
This is a story of a woman who somehow wound up in a sexless marriage. Hubby wasn't even trying to perform his duties. She was going a month in between sessions and when she had them, they were inadequate. It's not like she was getting it 5 times a week and needed more, she was in a complete drought. Now, the neighbor was a predator and did drug her to drop the inhibitions to get his way, but, it did open her eyes to how sexless her marriage was. After her first encounter, she tried seduction to change her marriage and her husband couldn't bother to step up. He literally dismissed her advances. At the court, Liz tried to break him out of his celibacy but was having none of it and abandoned his wife. What was she supposed to do? Go crawling home? She realized that her married life was no longer satisfactory and went home with the couple. The husband decided to dissolve the marriage instantly which lays out another selfish fault within him. If he had no desire to use his wife sexually, then why is he upset when somebody else does? If all he needs is someone to cook, clean and do laundry, hire a housekeeper!
I didn't like the preamble to the story nor the swinging slut crap at the end, but on the context of awakening and freeing herself from a loveless marriage, it was a good story. 4 stars.
I thought it was a good story. You did a different take on making the cheating wife cheat on her husband, and according to her, she wasn't really being satisfied at home by her husband either. I'm guessing neither had much experience with sex before they got married. Honestly, I don't think you were a slut, maybe after your divorce you became one, but not before. Being a wife and mother of your children IS a full time job, and it doesn't end when they leave for college either.
Personally I'm glad I'm not married to you, as I won't live with a cheating wife even if she's getting the sex she needs. I'd rather live with my wife who I've been married to for over 40 years now. Yes, some of us do make a commitment to keep our vows.
Kireie8 had it almost right, Divorce first then play all you want. Actually, in my mind, once she files and they separate, THEN she’s free to get her feet in the air. I would not insist she be celibate during the waiting period.
When you sample the goods and play around before the divorce action, that’s called cheating.
Divorce first.
Then be a slut after divorce is final.
Make sure you saved enough to buy a cat or two later.
what a crock of shit I wish the writers & commentaters lived in the real world
wife is a complete cheating slut, hubby was correct in his assessment. Sure was easy to write the husband character as a wimp and sexually unfulfilling, so she could justify her betrayal. Roger and Liz are evil people who live only for their own pleasure no matter who they hurt. Would be wonderful if all three were done in by a variety of STD's!
What next? Well first the truth, no way this is the first time she spread her cheating skank slut legs for another man. She's a natural porn liar as well as a whore so only an idiot would believe this is her first. So let's assume on the low side, she's fucked ten guys in 20 years, minimum for a piece of trash like her. Now she blames hubby because he's no good in bed. Why did she marry him in the first place if all she care about is a big dick to keep her happy? God forbid, she'd think of somebody besides herself. Only hope here is the STD's do her in before she shares her deceased cunt with other losers like her.
How much do you want to bet that Simon knows about all the other times she spread her legs for other guys. You know, the times she never told us about because telling us about them would flush her narrative down the shitter.
As for what Simon and his church lady do, I think he's getting rode raw by a sex fiend who only has eyes for one man.
As for what she's getting, I'm going to assume it'll be a round of antibiotics at some time in the future.
Hey, you makes your choice then you pays the piper for music.
Her husband's correct in calling her a slut. She had sex with Roger & Liz prior to him being aware of it-- maybe. But Liz asking if he wanted a blow job, having to know Simon's thoughts & relationship with his wife, was just idiotic. Her spending the night with them instead of asking them to bring her home ignited the demolition of their marriage. If she treated her husband better, perhaps he wouldn't have needed the church lady. Better in the fact of not being with Roger & Liz, & perhaps another friend or 3. On the other hand, if Simon DID know of her activities, he should've confronted her before that overnight stay. Bob
yes you are a slut, if you are that unhappy with your life then you should leave before getting involved with others
Oh my God! All these self-righteous dudes who're on a porn site reading stories about "Loving wives" and who then want to sit in judgment because she's a "slut"! FFS, what did they expect? Why are they even reading this story - particularly given its title? Why are they even on Literotica? It never ceases to amaze me how many men want to criticise women for having a wild sex life (even a fictional one) while they secretly dream of doing similar things themselves.
The story itself? Pretty good - the characters are largely believable and plot and setting work as well. In general I enjoy your stories. Thank you.
What everyone should remember is, this is FICTION! Read the story and if you don't like the way it's going, STOP. No one is twisting your arm to continue. I stop reading alot of these stories because they are so far fetched, they should probably start out with " ONCE UPON A TIME, IN A LAND FAR FAR AWAY ". I myself stopped reading this story about the time she stated her husband refused blowjobs. You know that's BULLSHIT.