All Comments on 'I Belong to the Living Dead Pt. 02'

TPE always a tricky one for me, whilst the fantasy of it is erotic - with the right person - the reality of it just doesn’t do it *sigh* but then that’s one of the purposes of fantasies. I still have no idea if this is still based on a euphemism or not *double sigh* although for me the story goes a bit too far. It’s all about trust and communication I personally don’t think that it it should extend to physical health and well being, there is *always* time for lube and plenty of it! Anyone who believes differently should only practice that belief on their own physical body and not somebody else’s regardless of whether or not they *own* others in the kink sense.

If this is a vampire story it still holds eroticism because that’s fantasy based but again if it’s meant to be zombies then, no.

TY

Tess(uk)

Tess (UK),

I'm a noob to writing erotica and I'm always willing to learn. Thanks for your comment and telling me what you think! This story is sort of an occult fantasy -- not "zombie" per se, but not exactly vampire, either. I wanted to play around with magical cult vibes, and I am sorry if it goes too far for you! Perhaps I should add CW for TPE?

I personally love BDSM in my personal life, and I identify a lot with Kaye here. The feeling of being controlled is, for her, a sheerly pleasurable one. I'm not trying to imply that her well-being or her physical health are negatively impacted in anyway.