All Comments on 'I, Blowbot'

Very nice story and setup. Hot too. Let's see more of what happens to Lauren. Only question I have is how did Paul put Lauren under his sway? I saw no mechanism at work here.

I am a blowbot

Well, so how did he put her under? We don't know what he was asking her or from his pov what was tipping him off that she was going under? Just how far will he take her? Will she be able to function as a human being or will there be additional trigger words? Will there be any indication that he will protect her from harm? Will she remember any of what happens to her?

More chapters of this one please!

Fantastic story. Love the mind control stories. Would love a chapter 2