All Comments on 'I Critique Jennifer'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
A bit long, but great

Keep up the good work, but try stories that are a bit shorter.

tinman69stinman69sover 20 years ago
Very good story

Sex is a great subject but it needs to have a plot also, like any good story. ANd you did that very well. Thank you for a great stroy! Keep writing and posting!

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
A better climax

Take off the condom before cumming

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