by BluePoppy
you just have started a real story, keep it going. In mature area seems best now. This is so very believable, erotic, human and worth reading every word. Waiting!!
Without going back to check, I think Noah drove his car into her driveway.....and then stayed the whole night....
So the alarm goes off, Elizabeth dresses for school....and how does she get her car around his?
A student car in her driveway all night? So much for keeping tongues from wagging..
At least have him park down the block and walk back to her place....!
Otherwise, superbly crafted seond (of more?) chapter!
Noah is one sexy and mature young man. He is 22 and older than the younger students, and even Elizabeth notes he is more mature. She touches parts of his body first in the dark closet, and then in her bedroom, so she can actually see and not just feel what he has to offer. Because Noah is one sexy football player (the quarterback, tight?), I imagine Noah has a bit of chest hair as well as a treasure trail that might really turn her one as she touches his chest and stomach. Hope they connect again and again -- with more descriptions of their bodies. A good story!
You took your time building your characters and therefore a good foundation for at least one more chapter. Excellent writing. Thank you
Loved it but wished it was longer. A third chapter would be great showing them after he's graduated and she's confronted her husband.
Can't wait for chapter 3. One little nitpick. When they're talking about where the husband is, it should be your not you're.
I know that's grammar nazi of me but it's the one slip up that I really notice whenever I see it.
Love this story . Many more chapters please. A college offers so many different potential meeting places especially if Elizabeth ( sorry Mrs McCutcheon) relaxs her ground rules and becomes a risk taker instead.
I liked him kneeling to return the sex act. I hoped she would take him for the missed sex he could give her.
This is really good, give us more as soon as you can.
Thank you,
Tanhors and family.
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter. This was actually the best story so far, I have read. Your writing is pretty darn good. I've loved this so much. I would have paid for it.
Everything is there, it just needs another longish chapter. All 5 stars so far...
Keep going at least until Noah graduates. She could always confront her husband and take Noah as a live-in grad student.
OMG I'm so glad you finally added another chapter! 5 Stars again for this one. If you want to continue their story you'll get no complaints from me nor I think the rest of your readers.
Don't know if you'll keep this story going, but perhaps have in conclude with Elizabeth getting pregnant with Noah's child.
I'm really enjoying this story line. Please continue writing more chapters.
A part of every guy’s fantasy having his favorite older teacher. Mine was Mrs. Nicholes
so hot and well written...I always wanted to fuck my highh school teacher Mrs . Ela Lenassi...abot 25 years older
I thought it was well written and illustrated that older women can still have sexual urges, and those urges are not necessarily lost after menopause.
My comment has to do with the fact that ALL the stories I've read portray the female characters as virtual beauty queens with shapely figures and almost insatiable sex drives while the males all have large penises and boundless energy. What about those of us who are homely, unattractive and unmarried females that crave sex as much as they do, and perhaps more? I have been a "mouse" all my life, one of those women who are never given a second look, wear plain clothes, and have never had a serious date with a man (or woman). My father ,a Baptist Minister, forcefully took my virginity when I was 14, and continued to have sexual relations, incuding sodomy, with me until he died.. I live alone and find some sexual satisfation by frequent masturbation, going out in public without underwear, and reading Literotica stories like this one, but still yearn for a man to put his penis in my Vagina (Pussy) and have intecourse with me (FUCK ME !!!!)
Well, he has given her some oral pleasure. She deserved this on the first encounter as she risked more than him. I hoped she was going to urge him to tasteher creampie, but maybe in the shower.
Bruce
Of course Noah tan after her to the shower...there is still time for sex in the shower, or Elizabeth would not have invited him...
Again...the touch of real life here adds to the whole feel of the story; and, I am happy to see, there is another chapter...
On to Part 3...after another Five Star submission!!🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
insanely hot series from a talented author....superb start, tension, tease, build up ...DM me on email to discuss more such stuff....give us part 4 of this sir
There's something so insanely hot about a beautiful, mature, educated woman in a position of authority yielding to her innermost desires with a young stud, especially when she is sorely lacking in love and passion on the home front (usually a cheating husband - what a cliché).