All Comments on 'I Deserved a Happy Ending'

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LT56linebackerLT56linebackerabout 1 month ago

It's rather obvious, Jimmy, but still good. Karma says you owe her. 4 stars for not much detail, but it was a 750-word effort. Wasn't it supposed to be?? Thanks, man.

The BEAR

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

average says it all not erotic just an happy man treated by karma

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I would have liked so much more. The unveiling of their affairs, the response by his parents, his sister-in-laws response to the affair and the money he would get for suing the trucking company.

kirei8kirei8about 1 month ago

9 months! Oh, please tell me no one is that stupid!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Wonderfully understandable. At least five stars.

26thNC26thNCabout 1 month ago

Might as well sue the trucking company. You might make a few more bucks on the cheating bitch. Good one.

Omart57Omart57about 1 month ago

Loved this one, Jim! Thanks for posting!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Yes 750 words buuuttt where was a story at? Kinda lazy Jim

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