All Comments on 'I Did It'

OK, but not great. Jumped tense from present to past. Keep writing

There is a decent story in there but grammar and spelling are atrocious

Nice hoy story, but I suggest you get someone to edit as I guess English is not your first language.

I loved it! So nice to see a slow seduction rather than instant fucking. Great job!

Good story but should have "opps"ed a pregnancy.

good god, could the English language be more butchered than in this story???

Enjoyed the story line . After seeing your name , I saw the language difficulties you may be facing therefore overlooking the missteps . Try grammerly .

Get rid of the pills

That was a fantastic read. Mom needs to 'cum' off the pills :)

Really like the thought of mommy and son

I am 70 now from the time I was 13 until I went in the navy I fucked my mom every morning before school. she was a bbw who never wore panties. she had no teeth and loved to eat cum.