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My hat goes off to all the commenters and instigators who are proud of their identities and aren't afraid to put the heat on me, using their pseudonyms. I only wish that Anonymous guy/girl would give me more to work with than "It was lousy". If that's all you have to offer, why say anything at all? Just vote and move on to your next disappointment in life.
I know that writing in the "Loving Wives" category is tantamount to painting a "Kick Me" sign on my own butt. I may be nuts, but this ain't my first 'boot line'. Who's next?
EMRR, signing off for now.
- COMMENTS
WolfOfTheWorldabout 2 months agoVengeance is not best served, it is best served so cold it burns. I've got one more the collect my vengeance on, but you can't on the dead. Loved the storyline, you must have served vengeance as you are spot on.
Anonymous2 months agoYou turned a somewhat decent story into a steaming pile of unbelievable shit.
Why would Steve have to support a child of his Ex-wife's?
He went from mild mannered software developer to black ops Rambo?
Grow the fuck up.
JPar69
Anonymous5 months agoAs I've commented on the previous part, to heck with the nay Sayers, It's good fiction and I don't care one whit about spelling or grammar or legal content. I did enjoy the story. The work required to put it together is obvious and, I thank you for the effort.
Anonymous7 months agoOh how I love an author that is enamored by his or her own words. I bet with a little encouragement you could have stretched this dribble on for at least a 100 pages. For what. Everyone already knew that she was a lying no good slut,and that she did you wrong and they are all embarrassed by their behavior towards you. So now they don't know how to act around you. They all feel they have egg on their face and feel thy owe you an apology that you are not going to get. Why ĥuman nature, they are to embarrassed. So let it go. I can't believe that I said that because it came from a guy that has never been able to let anything go, so I am telling an author to have his main character let something go ironically.
Anonymous8 months agoWHY do so many commenters continue to take these fiction/fantasy stories as they were reality?
To read some of the comments a person would conclude their BP increased by 200 points each, just from reading the story.
Norseman123about 1 year agoGood story 5* but your treatment of the kids was over the top it was in no way their fault. You should have put the disabled one in a caring home.
EdgeOfSundownover 1 year agoThe "Kick Me" sign analogy only goes for the RAAC cuckys and their pathetic worshippers..
