All Comments on 'I Don’t Like My Stepdad'

No, no, no, no.....you need to show us what is going on with everyone and their sex. You are just telling us which quite frankly is a bit boring. we had sex like bunnies, we had sex on the couch, yada yada yada. Try showing us by describing what is going on. Slow it down a bit.

5 Stars. I liked it. Please continue.

Ignore "winterplaying", they have no idea what they are talking about. I will be the one to stand up and say that whenever you say those EXACT phrases she listed, it turns me on like nothing ever. I love to know where they fucked, what position, how many times, etc. I don't need that lame bullshit they're espousing. I get off just fine with your magical writing.

PLEASE, I am begging you to continue this story. This line "Typical of us, we were naked on the couch when we talked. I had a wad of tissue paper against my pussy, so I was not making a mess with sperm on the couch while we talked." -- OH MY GOD. A wad of tissue paper to stop the sperm that was dripping out of her FROM HER STEPDAD. So damn hot. It had me sooooo turned on I came. I am desperate for more of these two. I want them to get even more depraved, and reckless. I also want Marten to have more dialogue and add more moments of those delicious tension points. PLEASE.