All Comments on 'I Don't Need a Father'

He needs to give his daughter a present- a baby bump

Great story! I love how you gave your characters, well, character! It made the story all the more enjoyable to read.

Is their gonna be a part 2.

Very well done. Loved the characters, loved the situation, and loved the sexual descriptions. I fervently hope there won't be another 3 year wait before your next story is posted.

Story was perfect and hot until the end. Teddy's little scene ruined it

Damn I hope this is a two- parter!

Unf that's sooooo fucking yummy

You need to finish this story, so hot.

Please please please write more 😍 I loved this so much

more chapter

... with the comment about your characters characters ! They all drew an interest in me and how someone can bring that kind of depth , in a shortie of 2 pages , is beyond me ! But when I run across an author who has that superb talent , and it’s a rare thing , I want to applaud them , and since the eroticism was so so hot , it became a standing ovation ! You even had a very clean edition with only a couple of errors , that I noticed anyway . But who am I , whose literary experience is confined to high school english and composition classes , all many many moons ago , to critique anyone at all ? Especially a truly talented writer such as yourself ? You stand in a very small , elite circle of authors who exceed the boundaries of novices !

FAN-FUCKING-TASTIC! One the best stories I have ever read. I agree that she needs a baby bump!

Sexy and hot.

Loved it! It was a realistic way for a father and daughter to have sex accidentally. Then I appreciated the fact that they really tried having a normal familial relationship but they had already established a good sexual relationship. Why give up something great when nobody else knows the truth?

One of the best stories

Pls more parts needed

Amazing please continue

Please oh please update!!!

A sequel please!

Need a sequel to this!

Amazing story and writing. Need a sequel to this.

Sequel please!

Great story. Super hot. Like everyone else says, sequel please!

Sequel please! Hope there’s a threesome and they double time her. Father and son seem close enough that they could do stuff as well. They could have a proper relationship as no one knows that they are father and daughter. Hope she gets pregnant.

I keep coming to check if there is a sequel for this every now and again. Hope there will be!

if it was teddy who fucked this would be great.

"I Don't Need A Father h. 01:" - Forty-one Year Old Father, Theodore Henry Simonton (Sr) and Twenty-three Year Old Daughter, Hannah.

This story is one that happens realistically and not all that unusual. It's know as Genetic Sexual Attraction (GSA)! Simply, it means blood-kin DNA and Gene related male and female (mother/son, father/daughter, brother/sister, and less frequently grandfather/granddaughter).

I'm hoping that daughter Hannah and her father, Henry stay true to each other; they're destined for a life of love, romance and an awesome familial life, especially since father Henry has not had a long-term family relationship.

The writer/author 'folwer' has written a very good structured story, in the vain of professionalism and smooth easy reading. The theme is grand, the characters, though limited, are well played in their roles.

Though this writer has offered only two (2) stories--on Literotice--he/she has the wherewithal to wright great incest/taboo reading material.

Excellent story, but the little 'Teddy' scene at the end ruined it for me.

Five Stars, but

Please . . .

Finish The Damn Story

Logically, if your father gives you $100 to leave a conversation. You leave your phone there accidentally on record and go watch a movie.

Fuck off, Teddy!!

AND ???