All Comments on 'I Don't Tell You Everything'

Loved the ending.

5*

Tc

Great story. Well written. Nearly perfect. (Although I learned a new word for stony fruits.)

Pretty good. Four stars.

My only critisism is that I thought everyone was a bit too blasé about everything. The siblings had been having fantasies about each other for a while so that was within my ability to suspend my disbelief, but their mother's calm response, and appearently not even reacting to it when she first saw it... it just seemed too far out to be belivable.

That was incredible. Well-written and very hot. I liked the backstory of how things pushed them to finally get together and be each other's firsts in pretty much everything. Nice ending, I had a feeling about uncle bob.

A romantic, erotic voyage of discovery. Damn near perfect!

If you can't indicate who's talking most of the time without saying who's talking, then you have more problems than could possibly be worth addressing.

Every time anyone speaks, you tell us who. That goes way beyond annoying.

When a quotation ends with a question mark (or exclamation point, but that didn't happen in this submission), and the first word after the quote is not a proper noun, don't capitalize it, regardless what your retarded (and most of them are) word processor says. Of course, if you didn't tell us who was speaking after every fucking quote, that might never come up.

More than half of these 3 pages was fluff. Details we don't need to have, that doesn't move the plot along, and gives no insight into the characters are all fluff. Basically you gave us a page and maybe another half page, but took 3 pages to do it. That's a waste of time for you and the readers.

Now that is a lot more like what typically happens in sibling sex situations!! I have NEVER heard anyone who Really Had sex with their sister or brother, say there ever was all that “ oh but that’s illegal “ crap. So is driving 56 on the highway, but we all do it

Thank you for a REALISTIC sibling sex story! This was really enjoyable.

Al

Pretty good story as fare as brother and sister go. Glad you put the mother's discovery in at the end of the story. When you first spoke about Bob as her brother in the beginning of your story, I had a flash back too many other stories where Mother's where also fucking brothers just glad you let that be known. I do hope you write more of the story as time goes on. I would like to see what happens in the near future with these two kids. Good story for reading. I am the reader in Florida with perhaps a real-life story that could give one a run for its money. Ha Ha

Very nice sex story...but even more, it is a love story of how close this brother and sister are...

Then, the bombshell ending, mom and her brother Bob, inviting him to the house so they can fuck...mom will be less lonely now...

🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌**5** Stars, of course...Yyyyaaaayyyy!!!!

not bad. tho was hoping the mother would join in.

Pretty good though fairly predictable but a fairly good read.

Ignore the criticism from cageysea9725 below, he's talking out of his arse.

Pretty good. Uncle Bob coming for a visit was a nice touch. Thank you.

Very well done. Thank you for this story.

Ignore the comment from Anonymous. The only way they can know if I'm talking out of my "arse" is if he's up it.

It's not always what cageysea9725 says, it's the way it's said. If it had been:

"Please bear in mind you don't have to indicate who's talking, most of the time. It can become very annoying. When a quotation ends with a question mark (or exclamation point), and the first word after the quote is not a proper noun, don't capitalize it, regardless what your word processor says."

I'd have no problem. That would be helpful, not insulting, and not putting anyone down.

Regarding the fluff, I didn't think it was that bad. But if cageysea9725 did, that would have been apparent from the start so why continue? Just move on, read another story. That doesn't happen because cageysea9725 isn't really interested in the stories, just what fault(s) can be found. Ammunition to use in vitriolic comments to feed the dopamine addiction.

That was a great story! I like stories that are believable as yours. Thank you for writing it. I hope that you continue the story. Maybe include Uncle Bob paying a visit to take care of mom.

;-p. Maybe they all go on vacation to the coast or go camping.

I thought it was excellent. 5 stars.

Love this story, and I’ll be adding it as a favorite. Some have commented unfavorably about the mother’s reaction to her children fucking one another. Good God people that is what great erotica story telling is all about. Her relaxed nature gives us a clear understanding of what this mother has done in the past concerning an incestuous relationship with her own brother 😊

Yes, I also believe the dialogue between brother and sister could have less “he said, she said” but overall, it was a very enjoyable read. 5 stars, 5 stars indeed ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️❤️

P.S. and please let us know what happens when the uncle comes to visit 😉

Loved this story. Thought it was well paced and believable. The story doesn't need to continue. It was about exploration and discovery.. the rest is a given. Brilliant job, thank you.

Loved it!!!!!!!!!!

Great story. Loved the twist at the end.

Guess cageysea9725 just wished he/she/gender neutral had written it.

Great premise.

But not nearly enough foreplay. And not nearly enough step-by-step progression with the sex.

No qualms. No reluctance. No dialog about how what's going on feels like to both of them. No discussion about what each wants the other to do, and wants do to the other. No dialog about whether what's going on feels good, and could it feel better?

Four stars.

Great story. I hope if it continues that Mom and Uncle stay separate from Bro and Sis.

Lost all electricity but continued watching TV ???

I loved it! Especially the ending. Mom has already been doing things with her brother Bob, so I'm glad that she wasn't a hypocrite and gave her own children her blessings. I'm looking forward to reading the next part. 😀 5/5

Well, I've enjoyed the story so far but there are a few things that I've issues with; he checked the bra size but not her panty size; Sue wouldn't let him finger her the first night because she got "loud when she got off", then they fuck and suck with Mom in the other room. Other than needing an editor clean up some of the dialog and story, it's not that bad a brother/sister incest. I bet Mom knows all about such things, lol.

It was nice, perhaps too nice some might say, but I enjoyed it. Very tender and loving. The fact they saved themselves for each other added a little extra special something for me. As for the Uncle Bob revelation at the end, I suspected as much when he was first mentioned (my mind thinks like that now after reading hundreds of incest stories). Would have liked to read more about the brother and sister after this. What do they do next? Do they have a full-blown relationship? Live together? And so on.

I enjoyed this story!!!