All Comments on 'I Don't Text'

You just do not disappoint. Easy five. Well crafted story, had me hooked from the start.

Definitely well crafted and a lovely story. Very worthy of a 5* vote

It's not a Romance yet, but has potential. Another chapter would put it over the top. It's currently an Erotic Coupling story. Very well written BTW. So Thanks Author.

Johnny

Hallmark tv movie fodder.

I would like to thank all of you who have provided comments on this story. They are all helpful. Regarding the comment about Hallmark- I have never been on that platform so I can only presume from the title of your feedback you didn't really like the story. Perhaps, someday, I will write something you will enjoy.

Rachel

You definitely have a knack for good storytelling. I really enjoyed this one.

-LKilkenny

The ending was a bit abrupt and I agree with the comment that this didn’t quite reach the “romance” category. But nice effort overall.

Cute premise. Sweet story.

For me, it would be improved by staying with the "original rules"...

And inventing more clever ways to frame questions?

Would you mind my kissing your pussy for two hours?

Do you enjoy multiple orgasms?

Can we be each other's Breakfast in Bed?

I especially enjoy easy, light-hearted sex...:+PPPP

One problem with writing this kind of first person romance is that it's difficult to keep your narrative from reading like some immense literary "selfie." Count how many paragraphs begin with "I." It's too many. That's why, when I write, I prefer the third person. When you use the first person throughout what can you call yourself? "I" and what else? Now think of describing someone in the third person. Names, clothing, occupation, appearance- all of these and more are available. Give it a try. Keep writing