All Comments on 'I Dream of Angels Pt. 01'

I'm not sure how I feel about this one yet. Rating will have to wait.

Sad. How saints are made.

bit pish being honest, but will read next chapter??????/

Like it a lot. Can't wait for more!

But I identify too much with your depressed thoughts, excluding the cancer aspect. I'm personally depressed too, not all the time but it can be pretty bad. I am waiting to see how things get better for this character. Thanks for writing this.

Either I've got crazy premonitions or I've read this somewhere before. I didn't remember the fighting, but the dead coyote, the heroin, and the general story was very familiar to me.

Sage I'm not sure, but I have seem to have read this before. Great plot line and twist I might add. I remember reading, I think it was one of your stories years ago? Maybe or maybe not that I read it.

Either way great story and keep it up.

A really absorbing and well written story. Brilliant, I hope that there is more to follow.

I enjoyed the quality of the writing. The repetitive detail of the seizures and his hallucinating about the girl were a little off putting.

Thanks for your effort

Beautiful story...thrilling, and warmly comfy too. Great before bed read. Very descriptive with perfect balance of romantic imagery and erotic sensuality. So sexy!! Love it. More...please.

To be honest, I'm not sure with this one so to be fare I'll hold off voting until the next chapter.

Some of the best writing I've found on this site! Thank you.

By the way, feign not feint. Please don't let my correction deter you from writing more, you are good.

My heart goes out to this guy amidst all his suffering. I've visited a nursing home before for terminal cancer patients and the desolation there was immense, especially among people in advanced stages of illness. The brutal disease ravages people and reduces them to shadows of their former selves. I can't imagine how difficult it is for the families to deal with, not to mention the patient suffering through it.

Really intrigued by this mystery woman and how he can unite with her. Seems like she's giving him a strong reason to live, to hang on longer. What will it take to meet her outside of dreaming, to meet her during waking hours? Hopefully they can find a way.

Wow just wow...

This might be the most amazing beautiful and emotionally detailed story I have ever read. Truly amazing, so in-depth with his thoughts and feelings.

I love the South Park reference on Page 2 (broflovski), also there's another one in Chapter 3; I don't know if the author has more literary references scattered through their works but I love'em.

Damn dude ! This was really good!

Wow that was Amazing.