All Comments on 'I Dream of Muscle Jeannie Pt. 01'
by fbblvr37
- 6 Comments
Marassoabout 2 years agoWow! Great to see you back to writing! This one was amazing and hot. And I can relate to Dave and his admiration for Kim Chizevsky, she was one of the hottest fbbs of the early era. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoInteresting premise.
But sex is much too rushed. Two quickie blowjobs. No preliminaries. No real involvement of her newly-muscular body -- except visually. No demonstration of her strength. No description of what it felt like to touch her muscles. No description of her pussy. He does nothing to her, she just blows him twice and magically makes his balls bigger. She doesn't even play with those balls.
No asking him what he'd like her to do; she just does it.
Disappointing.
Three stars.
BruceWoabout 2 years agoI hope there is a second chapter including him add some mass himself so can can give her some good poundings
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