All Comments on 'I Found My Sister Stripping Ch. 01'

by Dark_Brother

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great !

very nice story ! the beginning gives the end away a bit but I like a nice developing story, not too long too.

The hot dancing and touching is creating a nice build-up while the end is almost a bit quick for my taste.

RakfanRakfanover 12 years ago
Very Hot!

Great story and I loved the way he ended up at home with all three of them stripping for him and taking care of him! Very good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Excellent !!

Great story, looking forward to more parts.

CWR2014CWR2014over 12 years ago
Great Story

Nice job, very interesting characters hope your keep the story going in the future. Thanks for your time and effort.

Dark_BrotherDark_Brotherover 12 years agoAuthor
Not ripped

I didn't rip this from another sight. I am the original author (Dark_Brother), and chose to post to this site as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ripped?

How do you know the two 'authors' are not the same person? Is there any way of not knowing or does the other anonymous person just like to downgrade any and all postings at Literotica?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Hot hot hot

Out of this world, insane levels of sex pleasure, mind blowing sucking and fucking, more and more and more, please and soon.

Cunt struck Lanc's UK

PreciousKitty82PreciousKitty82over 12 years ago
WHEW!!!

This was so hot that if I had a dick, I'd have shot my load all over my laptop!!

KojoteKojoteover 12 years ago
Well...

What can I say?

Normally I like more building up, but you got it right. A few more details wouldn't have hurt, but I liked it anyway.

Really well done. Thank you!

dezurtdawgdezurtdawgover 12 years ago
Well done!

This is a great story (all 6 chapters)! So glad you finally posted it here. When do you think you will be posting Broken Bliss on this site? IMHO that is also one smoking hot story like this one.

Thanks for the post.

dezurtdawg

prop69prop69over 12 years ago
FUCKING AWESOME

OMG.....The scene at the condo is any young man's dream. 3 incredibly sexy naked women. WOW

Chiara23Chiara23over 12 years ago
wow! just fucking wow!

Very well done! I agree with preciouskitty. I think I have to go fuck my hubby now lol

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Catching Up

After reading chapter 4 of "Broken Bliss" earlier today I said I would have to come back and read the only story of yours I hadn't yet read. And what a read it is turning out to be. Can't wait to read the whole thing!

You are a very talented author!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
rewrite please

you really need to rewrite your stories " I FOUND MY SISTER STRIPPING" and " BROKEN BLISS" they are suposed to be interconnected but you fucked up the details get a good editor and rewrite both series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
just wondering

Eight inches is not as big . . As it is being described. . .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
odd, but good

8 inches is big to me... cuz i'm a tiny girl. so :p to whoever said 8 inches is not as big as it seems. You try being 4' 11", and barely 120 lbs, and have a 6ft tall guy shove a 8 inch cock in ya. lol, its good, but its alot.

Anyway, good story!

InfiniteFoldingSpaceInfiniteFoldingSpaceover 10 years ago
Serious problems

a) No strip joint is (legally) like that in the US.

b) No one walks around with a load of spunk in their pants for hours.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

First, after reading the comments below, I would kill for a girlfriend that was 4'11" :) (though I might not mention that to my wife, lol)

I about spewed my coffee when the kid said 'were going to have gross children and be cast out wherever we go' rofl!! ...even nieve first time sex I prolly wouldnt have bothered to even ask if she was on birth control till the morning rolled around;) (well, since the thought occured after the fact)

...otherwise a good first chapter! ...wonder if the short girl below lives in north Texas (mischevious grin;)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
:D

Thanks for the story and the effort! It was pleasant to read.

KrazyTaz12KrazyTaz12about 9 years ago
Aweome

Loved the Story Keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Im pretty much with him on not caring about going to a titty bar, only times I went were when friends drug me with them. Whats the point? So I can get horny over something I cant touch or fuck? ...and if I could fuck her, would I really want to and risk it? Lol. Watch free porn or call a fwb ;)

Doesn't look at his cash and slaps down a hundred? Lol!

"" She pulls off a shiny red sequined top, and gyrates her hips some. I am able to see her panties under her very short skirt, and am surprised to see a slight wet spot. Was that from me or her? I don't dare look down at my crotch to find out. How embarrassing. ""

@@@ How the hell could it come from you? Soak thru boxers and jeans, lol. Not likely!

"" Her gyrations are really beginning to get to me, and I can feel my orgasm coming, when her fingers dig into my scalp, and she begins convulsing and thrashing in my lap. A loud wail escapes her lips, and I groan as my sperm flood my underwear. ""

@@@ you're kidding right? Loser just came in his pants from someone wiggling on his lap?! How sad ass!! Lol!

"" Sis, no! That's incest! What we've done is bad enough, but we can't do THAT!" I tried to protest, but I didn't move as she slowly positioned herself over me. ""

@@@ yah, NO guy with a hottie sister that wants to fuck him would EVER say anything like that!! Silly stories and their plots, hehehe!!

"" I reached my right hand down to where me and my sister were joined, and began to play with her clit. Her pussy clamped down on me, and this time I was the one yelling. "Fuck me, sister! Oh, I love the way your pussy feels. Fuck, me! I never knew it could feel this good! Oh, I am about to cum!" ""

@@@ like mr. Virgin boy would know to play with her cli, lol....and you'd think after cumming three or four times now he'd last a little longer! Lol.

"" "I'm so sorry," I blurted, realizing what I'd done. "I should have pulled out. Now we're going to have gross children, and be cast out everywhere we go." ""

@@@ boy! They're really playing up the retarded ignorant child of religious parents bit, eh? Rofl. Interestingly, don't think Ive ever dated or hooked up with a girl that wasn't on birth control!

thebug37thebug37over 8 years ago
Lil Brother

Guess older sister enjoyed the results of her dancing and the fact little brother was well hung - keep up this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fuck ME!

Fuck me man! I want your cock in my pussy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Wow

Just wow. Simple and hot as fuck

lex8508lex8508almost 3 years ago

Man, I wish I would've had a hot older sister that would've taught me about pleasure instead of treating me like shit and beating me like my actual sister did/still does. (treats me like shit that is, I'm a foot taller than her now) And Dixie's piercings.. fuck I love a chick with pierced nipples, too bad actual clit rings are rare and it's their hoods that are pierced, a little hoop through her clit would be so stupidly sexy.. And nothing is hotter than pierced pokies though a thin button up shirt.

Radomir1Radomir1over 2 years ago

Great story.

I would add that Dixie didn't dance because she's a virgin. And John popped her cherry.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Not realistic. Why would any real brother or sister act this way in this situation?

rtch0bkrrtch0bkr4 months ago

Awesome story!!!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Awesome story

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