All Comments on 'I Give My Niece a Ride Ch. 02'

So what was her decision? Will Mark leave his wife? Will his brother beat his ass?

Please don't leave us hanging like this!!

I hope to find out what happens next!

We need more!!! >.<

Sorry folks. Like I said at end of story that is it. I don't see the point in writing where WW III breaks out. It would be very depressing as divorce from hell commences and a large extended family is torn apart at the least. I can't see how it would work out well in the real world. I suppose they could run away together but even then the odds of it lasting long term would be small. Stories like this are fantasy but I try to reflect a degree of reality and to continue wouldn't be pretty.

I am in agreement with every one else. but also understand your reasoning for leaving us hanging. But I am with every one else that it's and unfinished story. The wife admits she is having an affair and but does not want a divorce but he can keep his young passionate lover and after the unprotected sex she is giving him a Love child and that is the excuse for Jessica moving in with He and his wife. every body lives happily ever after. so it does not have to be all doom and gloom and a fairy tail ending . I almost gave it 4 stars instead of 5 but gave in you got 5 from me

Years later, Jessica would often call me from her bunk on the International Space Station, hundreds of miles overhead. "Uncle Mark," she would whine, "won't you reconsider?" I would remain silent, because it is indeed too late. Having donated my larynx and testicles to the local high school biology department, and having tattooed pictures of Sponge Bob all over my chest and back, I was no longer in her world, of it but not in it, a silent eunuch going from convention to Nickelodeon Fan Club Convention, silently peddling my Crabby Patties. Little did I know that my silent, asexual graphic bliss would suddenly end when Laura unexpectedly returned from her "business trip" carrying a whip and sporting a brand new penis. Oh, I thought frantically, help me, Squidward!