All Comments on 'I Got Caught in Girls Underclothes Ch. 02'

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Cryo9Cryo9over 9 years ago

I do hope you'll do a chapter 3 soon :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Holy Crap!

You're a pretty good writer, but blah, blah, blah. This thing is too drawn out! Don't bother with chapter three. I don't think I could stay awake...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great

Drawn out - yes but definatly worth the read

Love how much detail your putting in. Keep up the good work

Definatly eager to read more

Fred HondaFred Hondaover 9 years ago
Good work!

Good development of the two and you are doing well to build the suspense here. Given this I will be following and reading your other work. I look forward to the next chapter

dbrainsdbrainsover 9 years agoAuthor
a note from the other side

For those of you who think I get long winded, I have to say that I've struggled with that, believe it or not. These few stories I've submitted are the only things I've written for others to read and it turns out, it's not that easy to get things right. So, I'm still working on that. I'll try control myself.

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 9 years ago
No complaints here!

Really enjoying this story..the build up...the tease...the whole thing...keep it up. Looking forward to reading on!

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