All Comments on 'I Got Picked Up at a Bar'

Nicely done

Nope!

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Your definition of a slut and whore is obviously different to anyone else. Your character cheated and disrespected her husband. She made her husband a cuckold. I guess you wouldn’t gave have her confessing to her husband. So she is just another cheating slutwife. And if she was happily married she isn’t anymore.

Exactly the way a woman should be treated and Exactly what I do.

Very good. No harm, no foul.

Done very gracefully by both parties

Great sexy story.

no harm, no foul. Nobody hurt, nobody denied anything

It’s great when a wife gets some side action.

What a wonderful loving story about a wife who is away from her husband for all of 5 days, invites a complete stranger to join her at a bar, then thoroughly enjoys cheating on her husband and betraying her marriage, because Javi is so sweet and giving. Hope when they leave his place they get run over by a car crossing the street and save her husband the trouble. Terrible!!!!!!

Great job, very easy to image the action

Kept hoping Javi was really her husband and they were role playing.

Nope, just another cheating wife. All the times Javi intentionally brought up her husband and she only felt slightly guilty one time for a few seconds.

The saddest thing about it is that she made it through the whole work week without her husband and managed to stay faithful. Now, he's on a plane heading home as these events occur and she can't make it through a couple more hours to be in her husband's arms.

Honestly hope her and Javi overlooked some physical evidence so her husband can figure out she just got done cheating on him and kick her ass to the curb

Hot but with a nice twist. Hah a gentleman predator.

Nice!

The wife is a tramp. The husband should trust but verify. She will leave clues.

Just a dirty cunt. That's it, that's all.

Ahhh yes the cum guzzling closet bound repressed little boys pile out of their closet...so to speak, theyre still there.

Another by the numbers "Word perfect" anal cyst.

You must be a bit of a masochist posting this story (and some of your other pieces) in the LW category — draw out those who love to moralize over a fantasy. Storyline and characters interesting, but sex lacked intensity/passion — described in some detail but … . Hope you continue to share — ignore rants — and ratchet up whatever you want for us to take home. Liked it, but …

Just another cheating wife with kids no less. A good way to destroy your husband . If caught.

Yeah Javi i quite guy and she cou;d have nsaid no to him but didn.t.

Not much of a wife, or a marriage. And the fucking was almost clinical, so orchestrated and choreographed. I hope someone writes the sequel where she gets caught. Or better yet, she catches her husband, pitches a fit, and the husband explains he's just trying to stay even with her. Overall bland and underwhelming. But thanks for the effort.

a GOOD EXPERIENCE THAT WAS ENJOYED BY BOTH. vERY CONSIDERATE sPANIARD WITH MANNERS.

Yes, I agree with one of the anonymous comments, if she'd have said no about leaving the bar with him there wouldn't have been a fuss (or a story), I think they'd have just parted ways. Obviously, she was more the aggressor, but why not, she'd already mentioned she'd had other lovers.

So thoughtful and gentlemanly for a womanizing Cheater , her husband should take her to the guys place , thank him , shake his hand , then kick him in the nuts as hard as he can then stomp on his dick while wearing rusty knarly and filthy baseball cleats !

I’ll never get these cuck jokes. Some kind bizarre, infantile and plain stupid.

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I liked your originality.

Ed

no harm, no foul. Nobody hurt, nobody denied anything

@iammweasel

Ahhh yes the cum guzzling closet bound repressed little boys pile out of their closet...so to speak, theyre still there.

Another by the numbers "Word perfect" anal cyst.

Ahh, yes you are weasel, as usual.

Just another heartless CUNT! boring! It's clear she is no loving wife. Pathetic POS. Only the CUNTS and weak coward sissys will like this. Oh, and those who complain about other comments can just FUCK OFF! whiny bitches.

Whore didn’t take much wooing to cheat, even from something named Javi. Ice69hunter, we saw your pussy comment the first two times you posted it.

I have to agree with 26thNC, in that it didn't take much sweet talking to get her into bed for a quickie.

"he looks very fit" ... a strong fit body is quick to make a pussy all tickly and wet. So hard to resist a fit body and a cool personality. Great story!

cute story, and a gentleman

The name of the story is " I got picked up in a bar". The subject matter of the story should not be a surprise. If you are offended by stories about a cheating spouse, do not read the story.

I am curious as to what language this story is originally written. It is translated well but still obviously a translation. I enjoyed the story. I agree with those who have commented that the woman was not difficult to seduce. However that did not detract from the story. This was a well-written tale about a horny woman and a horny man who got together.

Slut! Hope her husband got laid,several times,while he was away on business!