All Comments on 'I Had a Jack-Hammer'

Ah, Literotica! Where every cock is huge, every pussy squirts and everyone cums simultaneously. Just like real life!!!!

(hot story, though...)

Fast paced. Both of them must have lost 10 pounds.

Good read although am wondering why every college boy is as hung as young Jackie?? Nice little twist with the colour thing at the end.

Why didn't you leave them together? Good story but it doesn't need to end.

I enjoyed your story of the 21 year old hunk who screwed the 44 year old mature woman. It was really special the parts in the bar where both were giving a performance to the patrons. The part at the end of the story where you reveal that the older women is black was very interesting. I am not sure why you left that aspect of the story at the end. However, that was cool. I hope you continue to write stories about very young studs who like to screw older women - both black and white.

Thanks for sharing.

time I saw a hint in Dani's dialect, or Jack called her Miss Dani, I would think back to the beginning and her 'frizzy, kinky black hair hung just below her shoulders' and the 'gold chain' was a 'contrast against her skin and a stark polarity with her dark eyes'.

I liked how you gave enough clues, but didn't make it a blatant black/white story; it was simply two people, twenty years out of sync, but in perfect mesh in bed.

Well done. Kudos.

I think you should have a follow up with her picking up a woman in the bar.

I'm still in awe from reading those last words. If there was ever a couple, a cock and a pussy, a dick and a anus, a butt plug and an asshole, a tongue and a orifice, it was Dani and Jack. The word love only came up once in the second last paragraph i think, but really, it was there the entire time. Well done!

Loved every minute. Wasn't till the end that I knew it was biracial. It could have been any two from any ethnic background. You write beautifully. Thanks.

Loved how you painted the picture and didn't resort to the same cliche`s each time. You also didn't make race a big deal and it was a very well written story thank you very much.

One of your better ones.

Stopped reading after he mentioned the joint. Not my thing.

What an amazing story. Please write mor, thank-you. I tell you this was one lucky guy. Weren't the two drained with all the actio they had?